Liam Mcdaid Poet Quatrain

- New Life Awakens -

With a loving heart,
filled with peace and harmony
In the afterbirth new life emerges
An eternal optimist in Spite of living

Starlight sparkles in this globe softly glistens
Everything seems to be perfectly normal
Gentle spirit refines where the thought is good
Dream you shine a warm sunbeam gift

We live for truth and justice sake
The numbered days and duration of happy feelings
A glimpses of human life takes shape
Golden delicious fruit of Eden

Happiness can not be conquered, 
it must be openly received
A sun melting inside warm thoughts
Staring across the horizon clouds pearl white

My desires, my needs, my happiness
As fallen people with meaningless deeds
Dreamy cotton skies echo into one song
The ability to grasp facts of nature around us

Faraway mountains sailing yearns
Over the hills a warm thought in breeze blows 
Starlight twinkles in the eyes of a dream 
Coasting along on a deep blue sea wave kiss





Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :)  25.08.2015 
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Eileen Manassian September 5, 2015 at 12:46 AM :) Oh Ian....you two are such romantics. Sunshine and you work well together. So many of these lines just really have fantastic imagery....I won't pick and choose...just beautiful. Congrats on POTD, dear. :) Hugs

Constance La France September 4, 2015 at 11:21 PM Ian, congratulations on poem of the day with this beautifully penned poem by both of you and Anne-Lise ~~

Arthur Vaso September 4, 2015 at 8:21 PM Congrats on POTD, makes me want to travel there!! (where ever there is ) :)

Gary Bateman September 4, 2015 at 5:13 PM Congratulations on POTD Liam and Anne-Lise!! An extraordinary poem for sure by two very talented writers who I'm blessed to call my friends. This one is quite uplifting with the wonderful message it sends to the reader. Cheers and Best, Gary

Paul Callus September 4, 2015 at 4:44 PM Another worthy offering from two capable pens, Liam & Anne Lise! Happiness comes to those with a sincere and open heart. Congrats on POTD. // paul

Casarah Nance September 4, 2015 at 1:35 PM Congrats on another magnificent write you two! :-)

Bella Mullec September 4, 2015 at 1:01 PM a positive approach. well done

Dorian Petersen Potter September 4, 2015 at 12:25 PM Hi Liam n' Anne-Lise!Wow!Congratulations to you both on POTD!A very beautiful love poem collaboration between the two of you my dearest friends.So very beautifully written.Just dazzling!Perfectly done!A 7 to each + Fav!Just awesome!I'm so very happy for you both:)Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light! God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Kp Nunez September 4, 2015 at 9:55 AM Congrats, Liam and Anne on having another of your lovely collab work chosen as POTD! hugs!

Neva Romaine September 4, 2015 at 9:50 AM Hey Liam, BIG congratulations on your poem being chosen for POTD! A beautiful expression from you and Anne Lise. Great collaboration. Well deserving! Be Blessed, Neva

Eve Roper September 4, 2015 at 8:46 AM Congratulation on poem of the day hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen September 4, 2015 at 6:24 AM - Congratulations with P.O.T.D. !!!!!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

James Inman September 4, 2015 at 5:39 AM What a beautiful scene this would make in a movie. I FEEL the imagery, so subtle yet so vivid.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 3, 2015 at 10:06 AM Liam and Anne Lise with every poem your are making you place me a trip to the cosmos and beyond!!! awesome!~Olive Eloisa grats to you!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 2, 2015 at 4:40 PM - Always a pleasure to write beautiful poems with you - thanks dear friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian September 2, 2015 at 9:35 AM :) I read this on Sunshine's page. I'm here to tell you that I've enjoyed the lovely imagery in this. :) Good one, Liam. God bless, dear. Hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis September 2, 2015 at 8:04 AM Every collaboration of yours ends up in a masterpiece! A seven to each, dear Liam and dear Anne-Lise!

Dorian Petersen Potter September 2, 2015 at 7:52 AM Hi Liam n' Anne Lise!A most beautiful, captivating love poem you've penned here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!I truly enjoyed it.A very beautiful dreamy sweet romantic piece to be held very close to my heart.smiling.Excellent piece!Very enchanting.So very beautifully written.I love it!Just awesome.Great imagery!Wonderful collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 to each + Fav!Keep your faith Liam!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^