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New Fall Jacket

new fall jacket and wool stockings grade five new school AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Posted on June 2, 2018

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Date: 6/4/2018 2:15:00 PM
I can see the small girl all bundled up - great visual-
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Date: 6/4/2018 8:29:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Michelle.
Date: 6/3/2018 5:30:00 PM
Oh I recall walking in below zero weather. Ugggg. Nothing like fifth grade in winter!!
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Date: 6/3/2018 7:01:00 PM
Were you wearing a mini skirt like me? LOL The good old days.
Date: 6/3/2018 7:23:00 AM
The emphasis makes me think you or the protagonist had not experienced such weather before!
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Date: 6/3/2018 8:00:00 AM
Thanks, Kim. When fall comes too early, it's always a shock to the system. We can't help but feel resentful...

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