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New Deep Rutts

The rutts were deep from constant traffic flow Then the silence laid back mountain exploded Spewing forth from that lofty height molten lava___ Soon the rutts were filled to oveflow Eliminating all those deep rutts How would this man think again? All his grooves were wiped out cleaned All thoughts channels gone Now only new forbidden territory New deep rutts to begin again.....

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2011 1:12:00 AM

Very different one and quite interesting to read, Sara.

Daver Austin

Date: 3/15/2011 1:36:00 PM

Sounds like reincarnation - or- the stock market. Good food for thought. Love, Dave

James Marshall Goff

Date: 3/14/2011 5:07:00 PM

story of my life.... bravo! Sara! jimbo

George Aul

Date: 3/14/2011 11:13:00 AM

A very good write....we all get those deep rutts sometimes......George

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 3/14/2011 9:23:00 AM

Amazingly beautiful write. It is great that you are devoting your time still for Poetry, when you should not strain before your surgery. I am extending my good wishes for successful surgery and quick recovery. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra

Jack Horne

Date: 3/14/2011 8:41:00 AM

I was only a kid at the time, but, yes, there was quite a scandal about the Onassis affair, apparently. My mother said it hit the headlines all over the world. I wish I could have heard her sing live. Jack

Jack Horne

Date: 3/14/2011 7:23:00 AM

Very deep indeed, Sara : ) Jack

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/14/2011 6:52:00 AM

The awesome power and force of Nature Sara u have written so well luv.. enjoyed reading your creativity this early morning my friend..

Robert Davidson

Date: 3/14/2011 4:01:00 AM

an engaging poem and thanks for your very kind comments on my reahing the first round. love Robert

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/13/2011 3:52:00 PM

It's the earth's natural cycle, Sara. All of the things we now view as "natural disasters" helped form the Earth we know today. Quite a profound poem! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/13/2011 3:21:00 PM

oh sara, a reviting yet engaging piece! i like the impactful effect of the last line! more good health wishes to you! :)huggs, nette

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/13/2011 3:00:00 PM

Profound and deep write on this Sunday afternoon... well composed and written my talented poet friend...luv Michael