Sara Kendrick Poet Free verse

New Deep Rutts

The rutts were deep from constant traffic flow
Then the silence laid back mountain exploded
Spewing forth from that lofty height molten lava___

Soon the rutts were filled to oveflow
Eliminating all those deep rutts
How would this man think again?

All his grooves were wiped out cleaned
All thoughts channels gone
Now only new forbidden territory 

New deep rutts to begin again.....

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Andrea Dietrich March 19, 2011 at 1:12 AM Very different one and quite interesting to read, Sara.

Daver Austin March 15, 2011 at 1:36 PM Sounds like reincarnation - or- the stock market. Good food for thought. Love, Dave

James Marshall Goff March 14, 2011 at 5:07 PM story of my life.... bravo! Sara! jimbo

George Aul March 14, 2011 at 11:13 AM A very good write....we all get those deep rutts sometimes......George

Ravindra K Kapoor March 14, 2011 at 9:23 AM Amazingly beautiful write. It is great that you are devoting your time still for Poetry, when you should not strain before your surgery. I am extending my good wishes for successful surgery and quick recovery. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra

Jack Horne March 14, 2011 at 8:41 AM I was only a kid at the time, but, yes, there was quite a scandal about the Onassis affair, apparently. My mother said it hit the headlines all over the world. I wish I could have heard her sing live. Jack

Jack Horne March 14, 2011 at 7:23 AM Very deep indeed, Sara : ) Jack

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 14, 2011 at 6:52 AM The awesome power and force of Nature Sara u have written so well luv.. enjoyed reading your creativity this early morning my friend..

Robert Davidson March 14, 2011 at 4:01 AM an engaging poem and thanks for your very kind comments on my reahing the first round. love Robert

Carolyn Devonshire March 13, 2011 at 3:52 PM It's the earth's natural cycle, Sara. All of the things we now view as "natural disasters" helped form the Earth we know today. Quite a profound poem! Love, Carolyn

Nette Onclaud March 13, 2011 at 3:21 PM oh sara, a reviting yet engaging piece! i like the impactful effect of the last line! more good health wishes to you! :)huggs, nette

Michael J. Falotico March 13, 2011 at 3:00 PM Profound and deep write on this Sunday afternoon... well composed and written my talented poet friend...luv Michael