For The Contest, "Ambition Of Hope" - Monorhyme, Sponsor, Sotto Poet
(Iambic Pentameter) 10 syllables per line, five feet per line Feminine endings, last syllable unstressed, and the first syllable stressed.
Once I saw the dark and cold night creeping, slowly pushing out warm daylight seeping; heard the blaring, hopeless sounds of sleeping echoing despair’s sad, woeful weeping. Felt the pain of fruitless daydreams heaping deep inside my heart and soul, now reaping nighttime's empty stillness crying, keeping silent tears within me forming, steeping. Then I saw the morning sun safekeeping warm and brilliant rays aglow now peeping. Darkest ghosts of night were chased, sent leaping from the hope of the new day now sweeping.
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