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New Day New Beginning New Life

New Day New beginning New life Body still bleeds Days have been a pawn of struggles Quest for long reach upon every dawn an ardent mind, a vision of concern sorrow, sobs, and fears patience mourned Retch the grim laggard illness unadorned idle morns, stark painful weary days, hearkened to the long chanting nights bray warm dreams for a New life.. New beginning.. New day 3/17/2017

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Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/20/2017 8:59:00 AM

May the new day presents opportunities of pain free hours and peace! A very beautiful and dynamic poem dear, Eve! God bless you!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 3/19/2017 2:53:00 AM

Excellent. Well carved poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2017 10:31:00 PM

long chanting nights bray. You had such unique imagery in this small poem,Eve. Well done!

Tim Smith

Date: 3/18/2017 1:04:00 PM

It's a new day...make the best of it.

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/18/2017 9:12:00 AM

The downward graph warmly goes upward ... beautiful ...

Eve Roper
Date: 3/18/2017 9:08:00 PM

Thank you, Probir, hugs Eve

Jill Spagnola

Date: 3/18/2017 5:20:00 AM

Dearest Eve, I greived along with you as your pens images created the deepest empathy...I love how you changed the flow of your write to still manage and emote the hope so neccesary for we humans to contiue to live! Yes "the body still bleeds"...:), jill