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New Cellular Reality


Human cells are wired
to talk and meet face to face-
now we have wireless

Invisible wires
hold us hostage by new cells-
from technology

August 21, 2015

~4th Place~
Contest: Senryu On Cellular Reality
Sponsor: Marvin Celestial
Judged: 09/15/2015

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Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/16/2015 11:28:00 PM

Lovely senryus Sandra! Congrats on awesome win!

Sandra Haight
Date: 9/18/2015 7:37:00 PM

Thanks, Dr. Upma! Hugs, Sandra

Marvin G. Celestial

Date: 9/16/2015 7:45:00 PM

Congratz!

Sandra Haight
Date: 9/18/2015 7:37:00 PM

Thank you, Marvin. It was a pleasure to participate in your contest. Thanks for the nice placement. Sandra

Constance La France

Date: 8/23/2015 7:59:00 PM

Sandra, oh so true, lost without that cell phone, wonderful write for the contest, 7 and thanks so much for visiting my poem, Cabin . . . hopefully I will finish that ending in another contest soon, I sort of love how I left it hanging . . . what did she see in that doorway of the cabin?

Sandra Haight
Date: 8/24/2015 8:06:00 PM

Thank you for your nice comment, Broken. Yes, don't know what any of us would do without our cell phones! But, there are problems they have caused too. Can't wait to read the sequel to your Cabin poem!! Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus

Date: 8/23/2015 10:49:00 AM

I like your clever take on this topic, Sandra! I always managed not to become hostage to mobile phones, but as far as internet is concerned I have been on the losing end! #7 // paul

Sandra Haight
Date: 8/24/2015 8:08:00 PM

Hi Paul, thank you for stopping by with your positive comment and support. Yes, for sure we cannot do without our wonderful technology in this modern age. But, there are drawbacks for sure! Thanks again, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2015 10:56:00 PM

One of the more intelligent of the senryu I've been seeing on this weird topic. WEll done!

Sandra Haight
Date: 8/24/2015 8:09:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, I so much appreciate your positive comment! Sandra

Richard D Seal

Date: 8/21/2015 5:40:00 PM

You'll never cell me this idea Sandra lol, but I guess it's something we just have to accept. Hey, we'd have no soup without it. As you say it's the new reality. Good luck in the contest, I really like this and hope it does well. Take care Richard

Sandra Haight
Date: 8/22/2015 11:42:00 AM

Thank you for visiting my poem, Richard, and for you nice comment. Yes, it would be difficult to live now without our amazing technology. But, most of us know we have become "hostage" to it in so many ways, especially our young ones. Thank for the good luck wishes for the contest. Sandra

Emile Pinet

Date: 8/21/2015 1:43:00 PM

Your word choices are clever, descriptive, and imaginative giving life to this poem. I enjoyed the premise and the skillful manipulation by the author to lead you to a inner plateau of self awareness. Emile.

Sandra Haight
Date: 8/22/2015 11:45:00 AM

Thank you, Emile. I always look forward to your amazing, supportive comments. Sandra