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A youth like Narcissus did grin into deep, where he could not swim. The reflection that he found, to his mind, did so astound, he jumped in to play with his twin. 8/1/2024

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Date: 8/1/2024 7:45:00 PM
Ah! This is so cute, Janis!! Laughter and levity, Gershon
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 8/2/2024 7:02:00 AM
Thanks Gershon. I was so unsure.

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