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New Beginnings

New Beginnings Now rising from a silhouette stronghold stands in its shadow, a servant’s heart Enters tenacious consecrated emptiness as hope ponders distant pipes When black crust lichen invades – enslaves - the mason’s ancient framework Bits of falling pebbles facelift rough cheeks pitted by mortar’s mortal tears Even as granite blocks shudder in grieving poverty of unsettled gloom Grabs at careless jaundice of moss and age against the scribed ascent of ancient angels - In corniced images of corn and elephants restored – tree of life woven in stone fabric Navigates new christened knights and chisels to Nativity and an empty tomb Noble dream to beatify anointed prophecies in crypts of holy mysteries and legend Intrigue of time - visions of a hallowed grail lost as eyes still search for holy treasure Now, living citadel, new beginning with no end, soaring sandstone above sanctified crypts Gospel message retold in vaulted arches and in rainbows of alabaster illumination - Strong walls like Templar arms guard breathing stone, a new grail, synonym for the redeemed. Dedicated to the restoration, the new life, of Rosslyn Chapel, Scotland. 2-1-21 Contest: New Beginnings Sponsor: John Hamilton

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Date: 2/7/2021 12:39:00 PM
i agree with what john says below about line length, but this is very well written with wonderful use of language..i've read some of your other poems and see a very talented writer..congrats on your contest win! :)
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/9/2021 9:39:00 AM
Charlotte, thank you! What a lovely message. I am truly honored. PS line length and my computer line length don’t match. Will have to adjust for the next acrostic. Have also had a chance to read some of your wonderful poems - marvelous penning - very inspiring. All the best!
Date: 2/5/2021 4:09:00 PM
Sam, congratulations on your win in John's New Beginnings contest with this excellent poem, well done _Constance
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/7/2021 10:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Constance. The restoration of Rosslyn Chapel really inspired me with the hope for new beginnings. Sending your best wishes and blessings.
Date: 2/5/2021 11:46:00 AM
This is a stunning write Sam, too bad the lines were too long, kind of takes away from the acrostic as it's not clear what the acrostic says. I had to include it as it is so well written...too bad could have been a top winner!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/5/2021 12:34:00 PM
Hi John. Thank you for your placement and your amazing contest theme(s). I loved this theme and I do appreciate your feedback - will make for stronger writing in the future - new beginnings! Blessings and all the best to you.
Date: 2/3/2021 7:04:00 AM
Wonderful write, stunning images and comparisons, great use of poetic tools to create a beauty of a real life incident. May God bless you with a top win. All the best for contest. Have a wonderful day ahead. Take care Rama
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/5/2021 12:53:00 PM
Hi Rama, hope you are having a great day! Thank you so much. Your gracious message, and blessings, lifts me up and encourages me. The restoration of Rosslyn Chapel was a true inspiration, and foundation, for this acrostic about new beginnings. I feel blessed to have seen a program on the chapel. All the best - sending you many blessing my friend!
Date: 2/2/2021 6:24:00 PM
Love the imagery of the old mansion taken over my nature. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/5/2021 12:49:00 PM
Many, many thanks Eve. Time has a way of impacting even the strongest of strongholds making restoration a necessary process for "new beginnings!" Loved this theme. Blessings and hugs to you.
Date: 2/2/2021 3:22:00 AM
Enjoyed. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/5/2021 12:47:00 PM
Hi Gina! So happy you enjoyed this acrostic! I love the acrostic form. Sending you many blessings, many hugs, grace and peace my friend!
Date: 2/1/2021 3:53:00 PM
Dear Friend, this is a stunning example of an Acrostic Poem, with real reference to New Beginnings. Your striking vocabulary, and imagery amaze me! Love ~ Mala
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/5/2021 12:44:00 PM
Thank you dear friend! So grateful for your lovely message. I have to give credit to Roget and his Thesaurus, a rather overactive muse and writing lyrics for many years. Like Chopin's etudes, they were a wonderful training ground for poetry. Hope you are well. Sending you warm blessings and many hugs!
Date: 2/1/2021 2:28:00 PM
Wow, love the striking imagery of elephants and trees of life in stone fabric, and alabaster illumination - lovely blending of old faiths and renewed hope, best wishes for the contest~
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 2/5/2021 12:39:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Saw a program on the restoration of Rosslyn Chapel and the Davinci Code. It really sparked my imagination. I so appreciate your wonderful messages - thank you! All the best to you!

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