New Beginnings

New Year's starts after all the holidays.                                               
Exercise is good for me and you but I am skipping Sunday's.                                                                          We are not exercising today and going to Subway.                               


Being good on a diet can be just a crazy haze.                                         
Energy why did you take off in a blaze.                                                     
Going with small meals puts me in a daze.                                                                  
In life does this really pay.                                                            
No grass to graze.                                                                         
Not doing any relays.                                                                                                                                 
I  stuck with this diet for a week and I am amazed.                         
No more dieting I want some s'mores.                                           
Going to have a sandwich with real mayonnaise.                              
Sounds like this was all just a phase.                                              


Date Written:1/24/2021                                                                       
Note: Acrostic Rhyme.                                                                              

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The Gem That Slipped Through The CracksContest Judged:2/10/2021                 Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 2/10/2021 2:35:00 PM
Awesome poem, Paula:-) This didn't "slip through the cracks" as it had several replies. It was asking for a poem with no replies. Congrats on your win in my contest nonetheless!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 2/11/2021 10:15:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win in you contest. (Awesome poem-WOW!!!! You made my day with your kind words.) So glad you like this one. Have a blessed day.................
Date: 1/27/2021 2:28:00 PM
It's tough to make an acrostic write rhyme as well, but you have done an admirable job here.
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Date: 1/27/2021 3:15:00 PM
Thanks, for reading, for writing and for your kind words. Glad you like my Acrostic rhyme. Enjoy your day with blessings................
Date: 1/27/2021 6:45:00 AM
Such a wonderful Acrostic rhyme, Paula, great job:)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/27/2021 8:24:00 AM
Thanks, for writing. So glad you like my Acrostic rhyme. It was fun to write. Enjoy your day with blessings................
Date: 1/26/2021 2:58:00 PM
I never make resolutions in the new year, especially about diet. I constantly count calories (for over 50 years now) and it's the only way to keep oneself in check. I enjoyed your focus on diet, Paula. Always love reading about foods and diets.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/27/2021 8:23:00 AM
Thanks, for writing. Years ago I stopped making resolutions. Glad you love reading about foods and diets. So true counting calories will work. Enjoy your day with blessings................
Date: 1/26/2021 7:22:00 AM
- A form that can be difficult ... and you have even done this with rhyme ... wery well done, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/26/2021 7:50:00 AM
Thanks for reading, for writing and for your kind words. So glad you like this one. Have a blessed day .................
Date: 1/24/2021 6:59:00 PM
Everything in moderation even food, Paula, But can't get enough of your poetry..
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/25/2021 12:45:00 PM
Thanks for reading and for writing. Glad you like what I write. I know, moderation. This was just a fun write. Have a blessed day writing away.............
Date: 1/24/2021 5:10:00 PM
Paula, I like an Acrostic that hold s'mores in high regard. Comfort food for trying times. -Richard
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Date: 1/25/2021 12:42:00 PM
Thanks for reading and for writing. Glad you like this one. Can you believe I have never had a s'mores? They sure do sound great. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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