Never-Ending

Never-ending I was having a dream… you were lying next to me soundly asleep in our soft bed, satin sheets and goose down pillows as the sun began to rise painting our room in shades of apricot and lilac I was holding you gently in my arms, feeling your heart beat, mesmerized by rhythmic breaths, gazing upon your enchanting face as dawn’s blushing glow illumined your beauty, and I fell in love all over again When you slowly woke, opening those dark November eyes, finding me watching you and smiled the most enchanting smile I had ever seen as I whispered “Good morning beautiful” And I didn’t want it to end but it did as I awoke, sensing the morning sunshine through closed eyelids and upon opening them found you staring at me with that springtime smile and when you whispered “Good morning handsome” I knew right then and there my dream would be never-ending Good morning Soupers
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Charles Avatar
March 23, 2017 at 3:57 PM
Your poetic style astounds me beyond anyo7ne's expectations Chris, I really admire your beauty of words especially with the power of your romantic written form. So very amazing. A ++++7. Erin
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March 23, 2017 at 4:15 PM
Thanks so very much for your encouraging and beautiful comment on my good morning poem Erin. I am so thrilled you enjoyed it.
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March 23, 2017 at 3:36 PM
- Every morning, Chris: ... bright and light ... beautiful and romantic ... a pleasure to read :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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March 23, 2017 at 3:50 PM
Thank you so very much my friend for always being so kind and bringing a sunshine smile to me everyday. :)
Hamilton Avatar
March 23, 2017 at 1:31 PM
Wow what a way to wake up, to the beauty of this write.
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March 23, 2017 at 2:14 PM
Thanks John, I appreciate your kind words.
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March 23, 2017 at 1:09 PM
A lovely romantic write, describing the perfect morning! Beautifully written, Chris! Blessings, Kim
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March 23, 2017 at 2:13 PM
Thank you so very much Kim
Parker Avatar
March 23, 2017 at 10:53 AM
You poet are a true romantic
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March 23, 2017 at 12:46 PM
Thanks so much Frederic
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March 23, 2017 at 9:49 AM
You paint our mornings almost as gloriously as the Creator! Blessings for a Good Morning to you, Chris!
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March 23, 2017 at 10:13 AM
Wow, now that's a compliment. You humble me my friend. Thank you so much.
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March 23, 2017 at 9:15 AM
Chris, oh how beautiful does it get, just so full of love, well done ~
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March 23, 2017 at 10:13 AM
Thank you so very much BW. Your kindness is truly appreciated.
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March 23, 2017 at 9:05 AM
A special write for the one you love , Chris. A beautiful never ending dream :)
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March 23, 2017 at 9:12 AM
Thank you so very much Heidi for your nice comment. I appreciate you my friend.
Smith Avatar
March 23, 2017 at 8:23 AM
Now that's the dream...Never ending...I've noticed your penchant for apricot...Must be a Texas thing...Lol...Have a fantabolous day...I'll be back after PT.
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March 23, 2017 at 9:12 AM
What's funny is I also had tangerine in this but thought I used it too much so I changed it to lilac. :) Thanks Tim.
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March 23, 2017 at 6:54 AM
Good Morning Chris, This is so lovely and so romantic. You captured the beauty of waking up next the one you love very well. This is most definitely a "wonderful" morning. A without a doubt seven and a fav:-) Alexis
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March 23, 2017 at 9:11 AM
Good morning Alexis. :) Thanks so much for all of your kindness.
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March 23, 2017 at 6:42 AM
So wonderful to wake up next to the one you love! Lovely, Chris!
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March 23, 2017 at 9:11 AM
Thanks so much Kim.
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