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It Is For The Best Poetry Contest, Sponsor - William Kelii Kekaula. Date written: 02/27/2026

Never Was - POTD


                   well, boy met girl...
           that's as far as that went;
       the storybook page left blank 
         by misfortune's inkless pen
              alas, fate was unkind.

             no flame was forged 
     to write "forever" in their eyes, 
   instantaneous spark of attraction 
                     from shy boy 
          turns to slithering smoke

                   his true feelings,
               indefinitely arrested.
             too tongue-tied was he 
          to bravely wander barefoot 
into the badland of "I tried, but no dice!" 

what difference would that have made?

                it's anyone's guess 
         time to pounce crept away 
 his prolonged war with silence, lost 
        his almost-girl now belongs 
                    to another boy, 

            the blueprint to a future 
               remains  just a paper. 
         dreams he dreamt - with her 
     sparkling like a diamond in them - .
                 constructed out of.... 

                      "never was"
                  d   e   s   t   i   n   y 
                    struck its gavel...
                              it was for the best
                        c' est la vie.
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Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 10:08 AM
Wow. What a great POTD as I visit top poems on the best new poems list. Belated congrats on this one
Ibeh Avatar
March 10, 2026 at 10:25 AM
Thank you very much for the lovely visit and comment, Andrea:-)
Rodgers Avatar
March 3, 2026 at 4:59 AM
Hello Edward, congratulations my friend on a poem for the ages and certainly POTD. I always think what would have happened if…. I know that God has a plan and a purpose. Blessings, Edward, Daniel
Ibeh Avatar
March 3, 2026 at 8:06 AM
Thank you very much, Daniel:-) I appreciate your feedback, my friend.
Patterson Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 8:13 PM
Great Job! this is a hauntingly beautiful exploration of the 'what ifs' that linger. I especially loved the line 'misfortune’s inkless pen'—it perfectly captures the frustration of a story that never even got a chance to be written. The way you contrasted the 'sparkling diamond' of a dream with the reality of 'slithering smoke' is incredibly evocative. A powerful reminder of the cost of silence. Well done!"
Ibeh Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 8:54 PM
Thank you very much, Jami:-) I appreciate your wonderful, supportive feedback!
Nicole Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 4:26 PM
Sometimes, the one you think is the right one, well; they're not the right one after all. I've seen this happen many times, when you're ' not looking ' that's when you're found. Something to think about, indeed. Your thoughts are tender and emotional, Edward. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
Ibeh Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 4:48 PM
Thank you very much, Brandy:-) I couldn't agree more with your comments, my friend.
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March 1, 2026 at 3:54 PM
Poetry at its best. Congratulations Edward on having received poem of the day… Beryl
Ibeh Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 4:38 PM
Thank you so much, Beryl:-)
Wolf Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 9:13 AM
C'est la vie, c'est la guerre... Well-done, Edward! Congratulations on POTD! ~ Gershon
Ibeh Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 4:37 PM
Thank you very much, Gershon:-)
Empress Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 7:55 AM
Dear EI, So good to see you featured here as POTD! I love the way youv written this poem on loss and love in such a creative and seamless manner! I especially love " no flame was forged to write "forever" in their eyes," how creatively youv woven words, and so moving too! The ending is beautiful! Congrats once again! Pleasure reading you today! Sending you light always
Ibeh Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 4:37 PM
Thank you so much, Inky:-) It's always a treat to read your feedback, my friend.
Goldsmith Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 7:44 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Never Was" write/story. Very true for many. Love you line, "what difference would that have made?" Some questions have No answers. Have a blessed day/week with your win...............
Ibeh Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 4:34 PM
Thank you very much, Paula:-) Most appreciated.
Bayles Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 7:36 AM
This is a timeless tale. Thanks for sharing.
Ibeh Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 4:32 PM
You're welcome, Mike:-) Thanks for dropping by, my friend.
Onclaud Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 6:54 AM
sweet congrats on your POTD award... i liked the contemporary approach you used here-- honest, raw, experiential... all the best, edward
Ibeh Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 4:31 PM
Thank you very much, Nette:-)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 5:40 AM
well penned, Edward. Congrats on your POTD designation.
Ibeh Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 4:30 PM
Thank you very much, Sara:-)
Rodrigues Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 5:30 AM
Congrats, Edward on POTD! Those first two lines, yes, say much. The most important ingredient that must be two-sided is love. There is no survival without that. …never was destiny, some won’t fold, for too long not pulling away.
Ibeh Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 4:05 PM
Thank you so much, Kim:-) I agree with your sentiments.
Kitchin Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 3:39 AM
Ed, well penned. I think we have all experienced this until the door opens for the right one. Congratulations on POTD.
Ibeh Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 4:03 PM
Thank you very much, Tania:-) We go through that experience and come out on the other side stronger!
G  Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 3:08 AM
Ahh but perhaps in the endless iterations of universes and choices he was successful and there's a happy ever after, one of many, that he could sense - congratulations on this well deserved POTD :)
Ibeh Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 4:00 PM
Thank you very much, Laurentine:-) Most obliged.
Seeker Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 1:31 AM
A familiar story of introverted inhibition leading to disappointment and regret, eloquently penned, Edward, as only you can. Warmest congratulations on POTD
Ibeh Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 4:01 PM
Thank you very much, Seeker:-) I appreciate it
Cunningham Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 12:58 AM
Sometimes things don't go our way in life but we try to pick up the pieces and move on. Congratulations Edward on today's POTD honour. Tom
Ibeh Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 3:53 PM
Thank you very much, Tom:-) True indeed!
Jones Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 12:57 AM
Congratulations on winning potd!
Ibeh Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 3:48 PM
Thank you so much, Karen:-)
La France Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 12:39 AM
Edward, amazing poem and congratulations on receiving the POTD honor ~
Ibeh Avatar
March 1, 2026 at 3:47 PM
Thank you very much, Constance:-) This was a pleasant surprise!
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