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Never To Be Found Again

Nightmares creep and swallow her whole nothing is left but an empty shell She is no longer home Dreams are now a thing of the past Shadows are cast. Alone she sits her dark room She stays alone and cries every night she has nothing to do with her lonely life She tries to break free of this endless hurt but now nothing is left and she has no reason to carry on She takes the blade and holds it tight she will now be able to sleep peacefully tonight No one knows what led to her end all that is known is that she is lost and never to be found again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/18/2010 11:10:00 AM
Tragic and sorrowful but powerfully written. You show some talent!
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Date: 3/9/2010 8:29:00 AM
wow...that is very deep...on the verge of tears...sorry about your friend...i know what its like to know someone who has passed...but the thought of you finding her like that is horrible...but keep living, who knows? you may be an inspiration to thousands of ppl :D ...God Bless and keep writing...-Brittany-
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Date: 2/22/2010 11:50:00 AM
dark and i liked it. :0.
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Date: 1/25/2010 9:45:00 AM
I see this poem was featured. Good! The poem is well written. Very touching!
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Date: 1/22/2010 11:15:00 AM
This is chilling, I'm sorry you had to go through this. Glad you have poetry to help you vent though. A beautiful dedication to a tragic event. Matt <3
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Date: 1/3/2010 1:27:00 PM
This is a nice dedication to a friend.It is up to me how this will turn out.Last year was the first year in the past 5 that I had to be hospitalized.I am not sure if I want to do it again.Jeralynn Clark even called Enumclaw Memorial trying to get me to go in.She lives in Florida.I will try and read some more of your poems.I wish you well.
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Date: 12/22/2009 11:56:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 12/22/2009 10:28:00 AM
Most folks who commit suicide are killing a stranger ... if they only knew that they are a Child of God, they might get help to live ... smile ... great write here, Brittany and in the last stanza you might want to change the word "lead" to "led" and then it will be perfect ... smile ... congratulations on this well-deserved selection to be featured this week here at the Soup!!
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Date: 12/22/2009 3:12:00 AM
Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Best wishes and much success in your writing endeavors. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 12/22/2009 3:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your remarkable poetry being featured this week Brittany. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/21/2009 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week, Merry Christmas to you >> James
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Date: 12/21/2009 11:12:00 AM
Congrats on your poem being featured this week!! Very well deserved. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you and yours. May 2010 be your best year ever! Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/26/2009 9:36:00 AM
Sad but nicely written poem Brittany, thank you for sharing >> James
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Date: 11/23/2009 10:57:00 AM
Sara I would like you to know that this is not me and I just feel that this is such a sad topic but needs to be known because so many die but so many recover when they do not die. I had a friend who did this and that is why I wrote this.
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Date: 11/23/2009 9:47:00 AM
Did lonely away or did she die from cutting herself? This is a tragic topic on which you have written but many do experience this in their lives. I hope that it is not you and if it is that you are getting help. Welcome to soup and keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 11/22/2009 8:12:00 AM
Such a tragic end, let us hope for a peacefull begin, in the new life. Sincerely, love, Moses
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Date: 11/21/2009 5:23:00 PM
By the looks of the exceptional poems I am reading it looks like you all have new ink pens. I wish you all a wonderful weekend filled with love and inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/21/2009 1:33:00 PM
The reality for far to many. The emotion comes through your words. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 11/20/2009 1:17:00 PM
Nice piece of work! Welcome to the family=)
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Date: 11/20/2009 12:24:00 PM
This is very creative welcome aboard fellow poet
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Date: 11/20/2009 11:18:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your splendid writing with us Brittany. May this weekend find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
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