Never Letting Go.

They stare, they stare,
theres nothing their.
They wallow and scream,
And there eyes start to linger.
Fulll of sorrow and contempt as they sway amongst the crowd.
Ill never bow, ill never bow.
For this prayer, this aftermath that iam asking to save and never keep,
May make you fall into a deep sleep.
Cry and think deeper into youre soul,
You are what holds me together, the other half to my whole.
My body shakes, and my heart starts to sink.
If only i sat for one molment and begain to think.
Iam in darkness and iam paralyzed and frightened to the very ends of the earth.
The day of my birth the day of my birth.
its all over now, and iam nothing once again.
forever it all was just one nothing, one line of words i ran.
From the corners of life, and the drop off's over the edge,
as cry's and hopeless crimes ablide, we sit and we vedge.
Doing all we can do but just sit and feel bad for the sins we fortold may come after or yet to 
have done.
Its the fault of our minds, that have trully won.
Inside and outside we reflect on the light.
we shout rejoiceing him,
with all of our might.
Somone finally hears the people crying out and reaching toward the sky
its the one we gave all with hands held high.
Thankyou for listening my dear freind, the boy in the corner may say.
Youre now a new person, and always have my place to stay.
my heart is youres and i share all of my love,
for iam youre father, youre savoiur above.
so do not fear, for iam here with you,
if youre commmiteing sin, and dont know what to do.
For i will be here im here in the darkness and in the light,
through alll of heaven mercy rains throughout despite.
so cry out to me and i will hear you,
and remember my heart is youre heart,
and wherever you may go,
whatever you may pass on youre journey through the garden,
ill be with you, never to hiiden or forgotten.
No tempations or no lies,
no let go's or annual goodbyes.
ill never leave you, ill always be here.
so dont you ever, ever fear.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/15/2010 5:23:00 AM
Very ,very good write my dear... I posted a few more you might like...hope your weekend is going wel.. always Michael
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Date: 8/7/2010 4:44:00 AM
Interesting..Sara
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Date: 7/9/2010 1:58:00 AM
Very powerful there, something that should be posted on different place's were the world can read, and i bet they will feel alive one more time for those who are alone in darkness, hope you keep this up, and i hope everything in your path becomes clear as cristal water, take care and keep it real!
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Date: 6/6/2010 9:41:00 AM
very, very good.
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Date: 5/31/2010 5:36:00 AM
I like the essence of the thought in this one. The tone of the poem is also outstanding. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 5/31/2010 3:24:00 AM
Nice emotional thoughts.
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