Never Let Go

Heads turn, hearts burn
the song of the love bird
singing out loud
eyes sparkle, souls dance
two as one in perfect rhythm
another romance
 

I've been waiting
waiting so long
I've been searching
searching for a love that is strong
now that I found you
I'll never let go
now that I found us
you ought to know 
There's no place I'd rather be
There's no one I'd rather see
right beside me
right here beside me
now that I found us
you ought to know
I'll never let go

Heads turn, hearts burn
the song of the love bird
singing out loud
eyes sparkle, souls dance
two as one in perfect rhythm
another romance

fall in love with me
place your head 
on my beating chest
and just rest
fall in love with me
put your hand
on my pounding heart
let love start

Come gently kiss my lips
look deeply in my eye
never say goodbye
Come gently take my hand
be my only guide
lead me to our paradise

Heads turn, hearts burn
the song of the love bird
singing out loud
eyes sparkle, souls dance
two as one in perfect rhythm
another romance

now that I found us
you ought to know 
There's no place I'd rather be
There's no one I'd rather see
right beside me
right here beside me
now that I found us
you ought to know
I'll never let go

lovelyric

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/20/2015 8:35:00 AM

Good work and an unbelievable level of talent shown here. I will definitely come checking more of your work.

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 4/8/2015 5:38:00 PM

Makes a great song! Surely she'll hold on... Keith:-)

Tim Smith
Date: 4/8/2015 5:43:00 PM

Thanks Keith....I'm sure she will...Tim

Eve Roper

Date: 4/8/2015 9:30:00 AM

I see you have the same problem of birds sing by your window. I truly enjoy them and I enjoy your romantic poems soft and gentle.Another 7 Blessings dear friend Eve

Tim Smith
Date: 4/8/2015 4:00:00 PM

I don't mind them too much. They usually are singing a beautiful song...thanks Tim

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/8/2015 2:54:00 AM

A passionate write. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Tim Smith
Date: 4/8/2015 3:59:00 PM

Thank you Ravi my friend.

John Williams

Date: 4/7/2015 9:46:00 PM

Hello Tim, So beautifully written. When I read poems like this I am never sure if the poet is talking about their own life or not. Either way, very, very, nice.,,,,,kind regards---John

Tim Smith
Date: 4/8/2015 3:58:00 PM

Thanks John. This is about my life...cheers Tim

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/7/2015 5:48:00 PM

The words are lyrical and bounce through this poem drumming up emotions with a passionate, inviting beat. Emile. #7

Tim Smith
Date: 4/7/2015 5:51:00 PM

Thanks Emile...have a great evening

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2015 4:45:00 PM

There is passion in your words, Tim. I can imagine this becoming a romantic song; it would fly! // paul

Tim Smith
Date: 4/7/2015 4:49:00 PM

Thanks Paul...when I woke up this morning it was playing in my head

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/7/2015 2:56:00 PM

This is passionate and sweet for the one you love, Tim.

Tim Smith
Date: 4/7/2015 3:04:00 PM

Thank you Eileen my muse was singing to me this morning. Must be the sleep I'm getting. It is spring break and we are checking out prospective universities for my oldest.

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 4/7/2015 2:32:00 PM

Tim~ after reading the lyrics I read the posts and your comments. I love that this was just there in your head. Songs happen like that sometimes when they are ones meant to be written. Loved it! had a melody in my head by the end of the first verse so I know it works. Lucky lady to have you, Lucky Tim to have her and be able to show it!. ~Jan 7

Tim Smith
Date: 4/7/2015 2:36:00 PM

Thanks Jan for such kind comments. It is a blessing when we can write for the ones we love....hugs Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/7/2015 12:15:00 PM

- Beautiful and sweet poem, Tim !! - I love romantic men :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith
Date: 4/7/2015 12:18:00 PM

Thanks A-L...I love being romantic...hugs Tim

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/7/2015 9:54:00 AM

Exceptional and Oozing with Romance...These words get me singing..these words keep coming like birdsbirdsbirds..Oh sweet loving birds.A definite favour It e!: ))

Tim Smith
Date: 4/7/2015 9:58:00 AM

I was having a beautiful dream and I awoke with this song in my head...those birds will get to you every time....hugs Tim