Never Let Go

Heads turn, hearts burn the song of the love bird singing out loud eyes sparkle, souls dance two as one in perfect rhythm another romance I've been waiting waiting so long I've been searching searching for a love that is strong now that I found you I'll never let go now that I found us you ought to know There's no place I'd rather be There's no one I'd rather see right beside me right here beside me now that I found us you ought to know I'll never let go Heads turn, hearts burn the song of the love bird singing out loud eyes sparkle, souls dance two as one in perfect rhythm another romance fall in love with me place your head on my beating chest and just rest fall in love with me put your hand on my pounding heart let love start Come gently kiss my lips look deeply in my eye never say goodbye Come gently take my hand be my only guide lead me to our paradise Heads turn, hearts burn the song of the love bird singing out loud eyes sparkle, souls dance two as one in perfect rhythm another romance now that I found us you ought to know There's no place I'd rather be There's no one I'd rather see right beside me right here beside me now that I found us you ought to know I'll never let go

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/20/2015 8:35:00 AM

Good work and an unbelievable level of talent shown here. I will definitely come checking more of your work.

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 4/8/2015 5:38:00 PM

Makes a great song! Surely she'll hold on... Keith:-)

Tim Smith
Date: 4/8/2015 5:43:00 PM

Thanks Keith....I'm sure she will...Tim

Eve Roper

Date: 4/8/2015 9:30:00 AM

I see you have the same problem of birds sing by your window. I truly enjoy them and I enjoy your romantic poems soft and gentle.Another 7 Blessings dear friend Eve

Tim Smith
Date: 4/8/2015 4:00:00 PM

I don't mind them too much. They usually are singing a beautiful song...thanks Tim

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/8/2015 2:54:00 AM

A passionate write. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Tim Smith
Date: 4/8/2015 3:59:00 PM

Thank you Ravi my friend.

John Williams

Date: 4/7/2015 9:46:00 PM

Hello Tim, So beautifully written. When I read poems like this I am never sure if the poet is talking about their own life or not. Either way, very, very, nice.,,,,,kind regards---John

Tim Smith
Date: 4/8/2015 3:58:00 PM

Thanks John. This is about my life...cheers Tim

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/7/2015 5:48:00 PM

The words are lyrical and bounce through this poem drumming up emotions with a passionate, inviting beat. Emile. #7

Tim Smith
Date: 4/7/2015 5:51:00 PM

Thanks Emile...have a great evening

Paul Callus

Date: 4/7/2015 4:45:00 PM

There is passion in your words, Tim. I can imagine this becoming a romantic song; it would fly! // paul

Tim Smith
Date: 4/7/2015 4:49:00 PM

Thanks Paul...when I woke up this morning it was playing in my head

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/7/2015 2:56:00 PM

This is passionate and sweet for the one you love, Tim.

Tim Smith
Date: 4/7/2015 3:04:00 PM

Thank you Eileen my muse was singing to me this morning. Must be the sleep I'm getting. It is spring break and we are checking out prospective universities for my oldest.

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 4/7/2015 2:32:00 PM

Tim~ after reading the lyrics I read the posts and your comments. I love that this was just there in your head. Songs happen like that sometimes when they are ones meant to be written. Loved it! had a melody in my head by the end of the first verse so I know it works. Lucky lady to have you, Lucky Tim to have her and be able to show it!. ~Jan 7

Tim Smith
Date: 4/7/2015 2:36:00 PM

Thanks Jan for such kind comments. It is a blessing when we can write for the ones we love....hugs Tim

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/7/2015 12:15:00 PM

- Beautiful and sweet poem, Tim !! - I love romantic men :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith
Date: 4/7/2015 12:18:00 PM

Thanks A-L...I love being romantic...hugs Tim

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/7/2015 9:54:00 AM

Exceptional and Oozing with Romance...These words get me singing..these words keep coming like birdsbirdsbirds..Oh sweet loving birds.A definite favour It e!: ))

Tim Smith
Date: 4/7/2015 9:58:00 AM

I was having a beautiful dream and I awoke with this song in my head...those birds will get to you every time....hugs Tim

Jan Allison

Date: 4/7/2015 9:08:00 AM

oh so romantic Tim lovely lyrics:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Tim Smith
Date: 4/7/2015 9:39:00 AM

Thanks Jan...hugs Tim