Never Hit a Potamus

Never Hit a Potamus

Never hit a Potamus,
on his grey brown nose.
Cos' if you do, he'll flatten you,
by jumping on your toes.



For 7 year olds
Contest to follow
KS 28.1.18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

Poem

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Stebbings Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 3:26 AM
Great children's poem, Kevin. Children love this type of rhyme. Good luck in the contest. // Barry.
Shaw Avatar
February 1, 2018 at 3:28 AM
Thanks Barry appreciate the comment, regards, Kevin
Wolf Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 9:29 PM
Very enjoyable...Reminiscent of ole Ogden Nash: "The rhinocerous...is impocerous." Thank you for sponsoring the contest (Poem - 7 yrs old). Looking forward to reading the winners and other entries too. Here's to less seriousness and more silliness! --Gershon Wolf
Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2018 at 6:07 PM
Utterly awesome!!! Thanks for the example.
Dutta Avatar
January 30, 2018 at 11:03 PM
Great one. Crossed 70, yet enjoyed.
Lawless Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 8:55 AM
CUTE....WAY TOO CUTE....CHUCKLING ..
Michael Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 6:50 PM
Very nice...I think it's great...All the best Kevin
Allison Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 4:45 PM
aww this is such fun Kevin:-) hugs jan xx
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