Never Had My Own Child Name

Never had my own child name; I was a pair. An identical, three pounds each.
Deemed cute, and we knew it. Dancing and prancing; dressing alike. Yuk!
Sundays were spent at church and grandmas. I was outside. My twin was in.
My husband found me at six. Claimed he would marry me. I hated him.
Teachers despised me. I despised them too, no secret. Strong feelings.
School, a prison where I cartooned and daydreamed, hating it.
Married young, best time of my life. Three babies. Better times.
Unforeseen artist, poet, word player, came into my own in my fifties.
Now live my created reality in the country among faeries, butterflies and flowers. 
Cartooning, daydreaming and still at school. Saving haters one at a time.

Written 9-28-2019
Contest: Story of my Life in 10 lines
Sponsor: Silent One
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Andresen Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 12:06 PM
- Caren, congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 7, 2019 at 5:13 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. I was very excited as there were so many marvelous writes for this contest!
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October 5, 2019 at 4:58 AM
Congratulations on an awesome winning poem... Loved it. Bless you always with much love and prayers, Gina
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October 5, 2019 at 6:08 AM
Thank you my friend!
Mcgee Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 4:51 PM
Caren...saving haters one at a time...and I know you are with your quick wit and fun ways. Congrats on the win.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 6:11 AM
Thank you very much! *drums*
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October 4, 2019 at 3:52 PM
Many congrats Caren. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Krutsinger Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 6:12 AM
Thank you so much Ann. *whee*
One Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 3:25 PM
nice take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Krutsinger Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 6:12 AM
Thank you my friend!
Gilmour Avatar
September 28, 2019 at 7:16 PM
This is such a wonderful write Caren! Your honesty and commitment shines through. Good luck in the contest. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Krutsinger Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 8:46 AM
Thank you so much Ann. It does not matter about the contest. The thing is - I was able to write my life in ten lines. I hope you entered this one. I wish all the poets would enter this one. I wish it was open to 1000 poets.
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September 28, 2019 at 8:28 AM
I knew I would love it, Caren. Your turn at the end is perfect. Woman on a mission - saving the haters from themselves.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 29, 2019 at 8:47 AM
Thank you Line. It is true when you hate yourself you cannot love anyone else yet.
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