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Never Grow Old

I see them dancing Across the Milky Way, Illuminates Stars, as they go by Singing songs of love Gracing the star Lit sky, as years Go by singing Songs of love, sigh Never grow Never grow Old, Old, Old They shall Never Die (Some of the words in this poem are somewhat quoted from a song that my mother and father sang in their latter life.)

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Date: 8/12/2009 11:57:00 AM
Love, Carol
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Date: 8/12/2009 11:08:00 AM
Nice poem Sara>>James
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Date: 8/12/2009 9:40:00 AM
Thoughtful poem in a difficult form. I like the way you use mid-line rhyme in section 2. And thanks for the kind comments on "Beagle". Jim
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Date: 8/12/2009 8:28:00 AM
Happily we don't inside Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for youre welome comments today.
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Date: 8/12/2009 4:44:00 AM
Sara, I love the sentiment in this poem. Staying young at heart is one of life's richest blessings. You have captured this feeling, with your words. (soupmail) Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
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