Never Grow Old

I see them dancing
Across the Milky 
Way, Illuminates
Stars, as they go by
Singing songs of love

Gracing the star
Lit sky, as years
Go by singing
Songs of love, sigh

Never grow 
Never grow 
Old, Old, Old

They shall
Never

Die

(Some of the words in this poem are somewhat quoted from a song that my mother and 
father sang in their latter life.)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 8/12/2009 11:57:00 AM
Love, Carol
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Date: 8/12/2009 11:08:00 AM
Nice poem Sara>>James
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Date: 8/12/2009 9:40:00 AM
Thoughtful poem in a difficult form. I like the way you use mid-line rhyme in section 2. And thanks for the kind comments on "Beagle". Jim
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Date: 8/12/2009 8:28:00 AM
Happily we don't inside Sara.Rgds Brian & thanks for youre welome comments today.
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Date: 8/12/2009 4:44:00 AM
Sara, I love the sentiment in this poem. Staying young at heart is one of life's richest blessings. You have captured this feeling, with your words. (soupmail) Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
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