Never Forget

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revelled in radiant days bright waiting for charming fall arrive captivating snowfall not far, gifts mysterious delight! Oh, how glorious glowing days were! gorgeous luminous sun appear! azure clouds, flowers ravishing my life was extraordinaire! birds gleefully serenading, lustrous sky gleaming glistening, grasses silky glossy tender my frenzied breath yearning! I long to embrace you closer, kiss you fervently, sweetest dear! nights feel mournful and desolate without you, melancholic bare! we rhapsody a joyful duet, life will turn anew passionate bountiful nature rejuvenates my sweetheart, never do forget. Written October 6, 2021 Checked by HMS.com (eight syllables in each line) Inspired by " Interlocking Rubaiyat" Poetry Contest Sponsor: Angel L. Villanueva

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Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 10/10/2021 8:02:00 AM

What an awesome romantic write my friend... So rich in imagery... I do not know about this form... but you have created a beauty here, and your poem speaks volumes about a loved one who you never wish to forget and vice versa... Best wishes and hugs.. ~ Ani

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/10/2021 9:30:00 AM

Thanks, Anitha. glad you enjoyed. I am inspired to try this form more often.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/8/2021 10:19:00 AM

I have not studied this contest form out yet, but wow, you made it very beautiful, Mala. Awesome

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/8/2021 10:58:00 AM

Thanks, Andrea. This is my first attempt at writing this form - I am happy if you say, you enjoyed it! Love ~ Mala

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/6/2021 12:36:00 PM

Hello Mala, a beautiful romantic poem you created. Love & Friendship Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/7/2021 10:49:00 AM

Hello Mala, Did you have trouble doing this poetry form? My poem The Staircase To The Sky. Only to find out it was an Alliteration poetry form instead and I did not know I thanked the poetess for telling me. I did not know I had done this form. Frioendship & Love Darlen

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/6/2021 2:55:00 PM

Thanks, Darlene. Glad you enjoyed. Tried a new form.