Never Felt Joy

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" PAIN AND JOY " FROM MY ROOF GARDEN, MY PHOTO, ©

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Was an evil man who never felt joy

The good cheer of others liked to destroy

Ways he found people to hurt

Pain on them wished to exert

But God stopped him from being devil's toy!







© Demetrios Trifiatis
       17 July 2018

10-10-7-7-10

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Maria Williams

Date: 7/18/2018 7:23:00 AM

With God's help he will be wiped off the face of the earth very soon. Awesome limerick my dearest friend....Maria xxx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/17/2018 1:49:00 PM

Ummm, I know of someone in a similar situation, a woman though. I've even written a halloween story about her. It's too bad that people can't just live their lives and allow other to live theirs. I will never understand such individuals. Thanks for the great read.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/17/2018 2:02:00 PM

Unfortunately my dear friend, there are a plethora of those people out there! God have mercy on them! We have to keep praying they see the light! Thank you for your kind visit and comment dear, M.L.Kiser! God bless you!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/17/2018 7:18:00 AM

Good survives over evil in the long run--great message in your poem, Demetrios.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/17/2018 10:51:00 AM

Always good does and fortunately so otherwise we would live in hell before...hell my friend, Vijay! Thank you for your uplifting comment!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/17/2018 4:15:00 AM

- A sad life to live ... "the heartless people" ... yes, unfortunately they are everywhere - Great written, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/17/2018 6:40:00 AM

These people are so miserable that become dangerous for the others! Thank you for your grarcious visit and comment dearest, Anne-Lise! Thank you! Hugs xxx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/17/2018 3:16:00 AM

Sadly there are many like him, but good will overcome evil in the end

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/17/2018 3:28:00 AM

Yes, with God's intervention my friend, Tom. Thank you!