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Why does the voiceless canary stare so bleakly? Why do the sullen grey clouds desert a sombre sky? As the ugly black smog blots out the valiant sun’s rays The honey less flowers kiss the dying bees’ goodbye Never Enough
Blinded are the eyes to threatened extinctions On deaf ears the warning of ‘Mankind Beware’ Lies and deceptive denial that our planet is dying Inhale lightly ~ there’s carbon dioxide in the air Never Enough No ‘free life’ for marine life stressed and bewildered Aghast with horror at garbage dotting our oceans Growth - Expansion - Development - Decimate the forests Strip and deprive us our oxygen with demonic notions Never Enough Oh Mankind Vanishing breeds because of your avaricious greed We hold our breath in Hopes for this planet to Hold Like a thief the stars you pluck from the night sky In illogical arrogance you build your towers of gold Never Enough Contaminating our soil with defective seeds of profit The clock of fate ticks ~ ‘Choke these weeds of greed’ New oceans we form with teardrops that we shed Over broken promises ~ that Man let fall ~ to succeed
No matter how dark the shadows A ray of Light will always penetrate
Footnote: Hong Kong - Dedicated to Kinzie a friend of mine originally from Canada who is devoted to the campaign to clean up Hong Kong, and is succeeding. ‘HK heartbeat’ which was born on 21 October 2001 as a simple text email from Kinzie in response to requests from friends Today, the HK heartbeat community is a dynamic network and home to thousands of individuals and organizations making a difference. They are making our world a better place today for future generations. www.heartbeat.com.hk Taiwan - The Buddist monks, recognising the need to protect the islands staple food of fish, for years collect the empty plastic bottles – recycle them, making them into recyclable bottles that you see gracing the department store and supermarket shelves. Japan - Have a strict recycling policy I’ve never seen anywhere else in my world travels. There are different bins for various categories of recyclable trash. Are WE all doing enough? Video Clip - Loren Allred - Never Enough (Live Performance) - From the Greatest Showman A very compelling song though not connected with this poem describes the sentiment perfectly. I trust you will enjoy it.

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Date: 4/24/2019 3:00:00 PM
Hhhmmm... Its never enough when things fall apart, making the center not to hold. It's actually never enough. Great write ma. A favorite poem for me.
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Date: 6/11/2018 1:35:00 PM
I'm back again to re-read this one...and FAV it. And, thanks again for this thoughtful and important poem. Sharing...
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Date: 5/21/2018 10:04:00 AM
I have never seen you my friend, deliver anything but excellent poetry and this rings ever true with this gem as well! A fav...
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Date: 5/22/2018 12:16:00 AM
Thanks so much Robert that is such a lovely think to say, and I dearly appreciate your words my dear friend....Maria hugs
Date: 5/21/2018 6:13:00 AM
The people in power do not care, they only care about the dollars! Mother Earth is wasting away and the common man struggles to make a difference! Excellent poem Maria <3
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Date: 5/21/2018 7:20:00 AM
Thanks Yazmin, we try to do the best we can I guess. Good to see though that people are starting more and more to do their bit. Great organisations like Kinzie's are cropping up more now. Mother Earth is getting heard...Finally. Thanks for the visit and sincere comment Yazmin.....Maria :)
Date: 5/9/2018 6:04:00 AM
Excellent and eloquently expressed. Great poetic presentation. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Date: 5/9/2018 7:47:00 AM
Thanks so much Ravi, both for your visit and generous comments. I always appreciate it....Maria
Date: 5/8/2018 2:45:00 PM
Superb!... I bow...love and light...^WW^
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Date: 5/9/2018 7:48:00 AM
A curtsy back to you dear Sir. Thanks WW, always a pleasure to see you my friend....Maria hugs
Date: 5/8/2018 7:52:00 AM
Never Enough! Makes me want to do a Bob Geldof if it wasn't for the fact this is a family site I would! definitely would not be putting it as eloquently as your meaningful piece! Keep the momentum going. Forever the optimist, Mick PS. If you haven't already you might like my latest 'EARTH'S DYING' - https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/earths_dying_1020413
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Date: 5/9/2018 7:55:00 AM
Haha, that would be fun, would be good to see you doing a Bob, maybe on another site, and let me know ok? Thanks Mick, I would love to read your poem. Thanks for the visit and great comment....Maria
Date: 5/6/2018 10:18:00 PM
Wow! Dear Maria, a powerful poem written with elegant conviction, a dynamic wake up call with your 'lovely Maria style' eloquent flair. It's a crying shame to see how human nature is savaging Mother Nature.. Your beautifully poetic lines decry these sins with a potent pen in glorious condemnation of man's mindless, heartless greed. A superb poetic presentation - a complete package - calling attention to this very important and timely topic.. Excellent and a fav! Love and hugs ~Susan xoxo
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Date: 5/7/2018 5:59:00 AM
Oh Susan my dear friend, you spoil me, but thank you, what would I do without your lovely visits and comments. Yes Man's greed , so evident everywhere we look. But with more and more organisations cropping up and people themselves learning to say no, I feel we will win this . Takes time to undo the damage done doesn't it? Thanks once again for your valid and sincere comments my friend....Maria xxx
Date: 5/6/2018 5:34:00 PM
Maria, i can only echo the wonderful comments below, and add, when you ask, are We doing enough, well to start with, poems like this you write with action i believe we will win in the end,,
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Date: 5/7/2018 5:54:00 AM
As I said in my comment to JM below, its slow progress but we are getting there. It will take a lot to undo the damage done, but on the bright side many organisations are cropping up now too., and so many are joining forces. Thanks Harry both for the visit and sincere comments always, I appreciate them....Maria hugs
Date: 5/5/2018 3:12:00 AM
My dear Maria, after your vacation, I came to travel to paradise, but I end up wondering of what are we doing as species...The word enough has no meaning to some of us... Love..
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Date: 5/5/2018 6:24:00 AM
Yes so true Pashang, and if we want to keep this Paradise of ours, I feel its time for action. There's a lot of organisations like Kinzie's Heartbeat Hong Kong cropping up, even here in Australia, people are getting very conscious its only going to get better. Thanks for the support and visit, I do appreciate it my friend....Maria :)
Date: 5/4/2018 10:06:00 PM
Deep and dark and true to human nature. Potent words Maria and maybe one day we will stop destroying the world.
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Date: 5/5/2018 6:20:00 AM
I think the World is taking note now James, better late then never as they say. There's a lot of organisations like Kinzie's Heartbeat Hong Kong cropping up, its only going to get better. Thanks for the support James....Maria :)
Date: 5/4/2018 7:22:00 AM
A praying group would be wonderful, but what we really need is hard working clean-up groups that can wipe down the filthy residue left by mankind. Excellent poem Maria, and yes, this should be posted world-wide in every language. Loved it! All the best...Charlie
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Date: 5/5/2018 6:17:00 AM
There's a lot of groups starting up here in Australia Charles. We have clean up beach days and everyone gets in the spirit and has a lot of fun. Makes us feel really good contributing in some way. Thanks for the visit and support, I really appreciate it....Maria :)
Date: 5/4/2018 4:16:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE your poem Maria!! It should be shared far and wide to raise awareness over such an important subject. And topic aside… such great lines and a wonderful flow!! A definite favorite for me. And the music… Just amazing! ~ Judy
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Date: 5/5/2018 6:11:00 AM
Judy my dear friend, thanks so much both for your lovely visit and comment. I hope my humble offering will help in spreading some awareness.Thanks for the support, I really appreciate it....Maria xxx
Date: 5/3/2018 8:22:00 PM
omg..this is clearly a case of Enough is Not really enough. Keep up the good work Maria..we cant get enough..
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Date: 5/5/2018 6:09:00 AM
You are so right Martin. When will we ever learn? Thanks both for the great comment and visit, I really appreciate it....Maria :)
Date: 5/3/2018 5:06:00 PM
Dear Maria you carried your reader from worlds of romance, dream and fantasy to the harsh real world with a noble message! A call to save the beauty of mother nature, human kind and the other species. Thank you for sharing and for trying to make the world a better place! Shining with beauty! Stay bright and blessed.
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Date: 5/5/2018 6:06:00 AM
Yes Besma, sometimes we have to come out of our dreams and fantasies (nice as they are) to face the harsh realities all around us. A Wake Up Call is what is needed now.Thanks my friend for the feedback and support, I appreciate it....Maria xxx
Date: 5/3/2018 2:37:00 PM
- Powerful in both pictures and words, Maria - An important message - hugs // Anne-Lise :(
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Date: 5/5/2018 6:03:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise, I know we share the same thoughts on environmental issues. Thanks for the support always my dear friend....Maria xxx
Date: 5/3/2018 9:39:00 AM
Ahh you have written a really nice poem with a beautiful message, are you doing enough?no we don t, it s not only the duty of organizations but of every individual because we also live in this world, every individual should plant trees, if a person only plant one seed it s enough but people still don t do it, trees will reduce carbon dioxide, increase oxgen, reduce the temperature, and will even protect the marine life, a really nice poem with a beautiful message for humanity
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Date: 5/5/2018 5:57:00 AM
You are so right Faraz, if all young people take the tact that you have the world would be a much better place for all. I totally agree, if each person could plant a seedling, a bush, a tree it would reduce that carbon dioxide by so much. Thanks for your great feedback my young friend.....Maria :)
Date: 5/3/2018 9:14:00 AM
Good for you, Maria, for bringing added awareness to earth's woes with this powerful poem. No, never enough, but at least there are many people of good will who are contributing to change things round. I am pleased to say that as of last Friday we now have a total ban on bee-killing pesticides in all 28 EU countries! Petitions go a long way in obtaining achievements!! Regards // paul
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Date: 5/5/2018 5:52:00 AM
Yes so good to hear, I read about it only a few days ago actually. Petitions go a long way Paul, you are so right. Thanks for your amazing feedback always, I appreciate it....Maria hugs
Date: 5/3/2018 8:10:00 AM
Ahhhh, how my heart aches for this world. Badly treated from the mindless, heartless and ungrateful souls... trashing it like it's nothing! Maria, your poem is absolutely beautiful and powerful! Peace and love for this planet... hugs ~
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Date: 5/3/2018 8:25:00 AM
Thanks so much Kina, my dear friend, both for your sincere comment and wonderful support always. I truly appreciate it....Maria hugs
Date: 5/3/2018 7:59:00 AM
A significant piece eloquently expressed. Thanks for bringing it to my attention. You must be very proud of your friend. Hugs Rick
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Date: 5/3/2018 8:03:00 AM
Thanks so much Richard for your support and lovely comment. Yes she will be pleased to see so many people on the same wave length. She really is an amazing Soul.....Maria Hugs
Date: 5/3/2018 12:39:00 AM
Wonderful poem with a very important message by a wonderful poet! And here is my message to all who read this: Pray for our planet.
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Date: 5/2/2018 10:16:00 PM
Powerful truth that much of the world doesn't care enough to hear or hides from the reality of ... wonderful Maria! Peace upon your friend and her endeavors. ... and I have one I think you'd like :)
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Date: 5/2/2018 10:23:00 PM
Thanks Flo, both for your support, visit and strong comment, I do appreciate it my friend. I would love to read your poem. All the best.....Maria xxx
Date: 5/2/2018 12:14:00 PM
A potent truth elixir this magnificent poem be, Maria! You keep letting your love of life and knowledge for rebirth flow from your compassionate pen. I love your work. Brilliant exposé. Love and best wishes.
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Date: 5/2/2018 10:25:00 PM
Thanks Freddie, for all your support, visit and strong comment, I do appreciate it my friend. Love and best Wishes to you as well....Maria hugs
Date: 5/2/2018 10:55:00 AM
I hear you, I hear you and pray the whole world would do the same for to save this planet and ourselves. Thirty-five years ago I wrote my first environmental poem, not as poetic or as glorious as this one but a poem who speaks to the heart! Your poem does much better hope it will raise human consciousness for if we do not realize the danger we are in it will be too late to be saved no matter what we might do later on! Congratulations! Thank you for all the information! God bless you!!
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Date: 5/2/2018 10:30:00 PM
Thanks Demetrios, I know we are on the same wave length on this issue. thanks always for your ongoing support and astute and sincere comments always. God bless you my dearest friend, and Peace always.....Maria xxx
Date: 5/2/2018 10:50:00 AM
As always, you write with such conviction! Maria my love... said it before, I'll say it again... I am honored to know you and call you my friend!!!!! XOXOX
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Date: 5/2/2018 10:34:00 PM
Oh that's such a wonderful thing to hear Jack, thanks so much my dear friend......Maria xox
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