Never Ending Story

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Subjected to the loneliness of night, thoughts of love are silently laid to rest. And buried in a tomb of quietus, wrapped in a shroud of lies, at truth's request. Within a mute rhapsody of silence, no mournful dirge grieves for a broken heart. And an eternity of teardrops fall as forever dreams somehow drift apart. At the bottom of a fathomless pit, all traces of hope slowly fade away. But love is a never-ending story, and happy endings occur every day. I pray my soulmate is looking for me, and time one day will set all my doubts free.

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Constance La France

Date: 4/3/2018 3:19:00 PM

Emile, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned Sonnet so sad yet with an uplifting message at the end that love resurrect . . .

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/3/2018 5:23:00 PM

Thanks so much Constance, I welcome the opportunity to participate in your contest and appreciate the placement my friend, Emile.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/30/2018 2:57:00 PM

You did so well using the words in this poem Emile. Excellent :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/30/2018 4:25:00 PM

Thanks Heidi, I welcome your comments my friend, Emile.

Viv Wigley

Date: 3/14/2018 3:11:00 AM

Well done, Emile, you made good use of the words required. Lovely piece. Good luck. Regards, Viv

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/14/2018 8:36:00 AM

Thank you Viv, I appreciate your continued support and friendship my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/13/2018 1:53:00 PM

Well done, Emile. Love the "buried in a tomb of quietus wrapped in a shroud of lies". GL

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/13/2018 3:13:00 PM

Thank you Line, I appreciate your continued support and friendship my friend, Emile.