Kelleyana Junique Poet Etheree

Never Ending Pain

Fears
Who cares?
Body trembles
slaughtering war
Innocent pays the price
Corpse lying without lives
Unpleasant sound vibrates the ground
So called brave men feeling no sense of guilt
Will war resolve underlying issue?

Only the will power of negotiation
There might be some hopes for cessation
Rivers of blood without regrets
Christian, Jew and muslim, peace
Expand it to Palestine
No derive from life
Stop destruction
Call for peace
become
One


Kelleyana Junique



Double Etheree: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 10, 9, 8, 7, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.

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Marcus Antwan April 20, 2011 at 7:32 AM once again thank you for your comments on my work. you are absolutely right abt the blame/ remorse thing. I struggle with the idea that ppl have done me wrong, while at the same instance, I cause suffering. keep writing because this poem took me somewhere in my mind. it was a lovely trip. :)

Robert Ball April 20, 2011 at 6:28 AM It is a very good poem, keep up the excellent work. you have a future here on the soup, which Myself and many others like, God bless

Matt Hunt April 18, 2011 at 8:45 PM Very nice. You could post this on an anti-war site. It's that good. R.M.

Marcus Antwan April 18, 2011 at 3:12 AM thank you for your lovely comment on my new poem :).

Marcus Antwan April 16, 2011 at 4:41 AM first off, the message of this poem is very powerful. profound. the Etheree is such a beautiful form and you gave it all the justice it deserves.

Elaine George April 15, 2011 at 1:28 AM Brilliant Etheree with very profound message, Kelleyana. We could all learn from this. Become one is the answer. Also, thank you for your kind comments on 'The Writer', Lainie

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Dr.Ram Mehta April 6, 2011 at 8:47 AM beautiful inspiring expressions on the war and peace, kelleyana

Carol Sunshine Brown April 6, 2011 at 6:44 AM It has been a pleasure to read your poetry today Kelleyana. I hope to get back soon to read more of your poetry. May you always find inspiration to carry on with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol