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Never Ending Pain

Fears Who cares? Body trembles slaughtering war Innocent pays the price Corpse lying without lives Unpleasant sound vibrates the ground So called brave men feeling no sense of guilt Will war resolve underlying issue? Only the will power of negotiation There might be some hopes for cessation Rivers of blood without regrets Christian, Jew and muslim, peace Expand it to Palestine No derive from life Stop destruction Call for peace become One Kelleyana Junique Double Etheree: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 10, 9, 8, 7, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1.

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Marcus Antwan

Date: 4/20/2011 7:32:00 AM

once again thank you for your comments on my work. you are absolutely right abt the blame/ remorse thing. I struggle with the idea that ppl have done me wrong, while at the same instance, I cause suffering. keep writing because this poem took me somewhere in my mind. it was a lovely trip. :)

Robert Ball

Date: 4/20/2011 6:28:00 AM

It is a very good poem, keep up the excellent work. you have a future here on the soup, which Myself and many others like, God bless

Matt Hunt

Date: 4/18/2011 8:45:00 PM

Very nice. You could post this on an anti-war site. It's that good. R.M.

Marcus Antwan

Date: 4/18/2011 3:12:00 AM

thank you for your lovely comment on my new poem :).

Marcus Antwan

Date: 4/16/2011 4:41:00 AM

first off, the message of this poem is very powerful. profound. the Etheree is such a beautiful form and you gave it all the justice it deserves.

Elaine George

Date: 4/15/2011 1:28:00 AM

Brilliant Etheree with very profound message, Kelleyana. We could all learn from this. Become one is the answer. Also, thank you for your kind comments on 'The Writer', Lainie

Samantha Drummond

Date: 4/8/2011 4:29:00 PM

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/6/2011 8:47:00 AM

beautiful inspiring expressions on the war and peace, kelleyana

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/6/2011 6:44:00 AM

It has been a pleasure to read your poetry today Kelleyana. I hope to get back soon to read more of your poetry. May you always find inspiration to carry on with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol