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Never Ending

It's not the same and never will be again... those days when love was new that I never thought would end, my head in the clouds Springtime was no longer a season, but a warm feeling inside regardless of the time of year I never thought would end till winter came While I travel my thoughts do as well, back to that time when nothing else mattered and every happiness that I thought would never end engulfed me in bliss And as I stare at the night sky hoping for anything, a word, a smile all I find is darkness staring back reminding me that this emptiness I now feel will never end... God I miss her

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Date: 11/24/2017 2:25:00 PM
Hello Chris,I also feel the emptiness in this poem.The last line grabs me as well. I feel the pain of you missing her. It feels real. have a nice day my friend. Peace and Love Always my friend.
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Date: 11/2/2017 3:01:00 PM
I can feel the longing..the needing..the emptiness.And the ending line grabbed om my heart-strings.I was missing you and your poetry dearfriend.Nice to read these beautiful words again.
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Date: 10/26/2017 9:36:00 AM
I love this poem, but to be honest I absolutely love everything you write. It's all written with such sincerity and honesty and this poem is no different.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/26/2017 4:49:00 PM
Thank you so vey much Iris for your kindness
Date: 10/15/2017 11:13:00 AM
So glad I found this today, Chris. Darkly beautiful reading.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/26/2017 4:48:00 PM
Thanks so very much my friend
Date: 10/15/2017 10:07:00 AM
Honest and heartfelt deep poem, Chris, enjoyed this one, though it is on the melancholic side:) hope you'll find your love to cheer you up soon:)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/26/2017 4:47:00 PM
Thank you Jo for your kindness
Date: 10/12/2017 12:36:00 PM
Very melancholy write, but so heartfelt, Chris. The extremes of emotion is like the seasons themselves ... changing, yet settling into a temporary permanence. Keep moving towards the light, brother. Fine penning this poem be. Love and joy forever.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/26/2017 4:47:00 PM
Thanks so much Freddie
Date: 10/12/2017 10:49:00 AM
Ditto Chris, you describe very well the emptiness I feel, I should stop reading these sad poems, but I can't they are so beautiful.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/26/2017 4:47:00 PM
Thanks so much my friend
Date: 10/11/2017 8:52:00 AM
Beautiful poem - your heart in graceful words. So good to see you here Chris <3
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Chris Green
Date: 10/26/2017 4:47:00 PM
Thank you Sara for your kindness
Date: 10/11/2017 7:33:00 AM
And now I am a puddle. Affecting pen my friend. xomo
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Chris Green
Date: 10/26/2017 4:47:00 PM
Thanks so very much my friend.
Date: 10/10/2017 11:41:00 PM
Yeah, it is strange how love changes colors, seasons, food, gestures even, into feelings and warmth. Doesn't it? hia is a beautiful poem my friend.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/26/2017 4:46:00 PM
Thanks my friend.
Date: 10/10/2017 10:22:00 PM
Wow! Chris, I have really missed your pen. I could sense an intense longing and desire in this well written piece .I think you captured how it feels to miss someone that you care deeply about- Alexis
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Chris Green
Date: 10/26/2017 4:46:00 PM
Thank you so very much my friend.

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