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She is:
beautiful &
precious
everything i'm looking for

We kiss:
extraordinary &
fabulous
surely, I want more

I have spent so long 
waiting,
imagining your style

I want you because your strong
debating
unwilling to cramp my style

In your memory
I've written a Limerick
a Senryu
maybe two

On the phone 
I speak in rhetoric
with lustful words 
to you....

JP_____AsAvvy1 4/3/06

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/28/2010 10:23:00 PM
I love this poem. Such a nice love poem. It is so beautiful Mr. JP...Scarlett
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Date: 9/21/2009 11:33:00 AM
very nice love verse! Light & Love
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Date: 7/31/2009 4:09:00 PM
J.M. Goff tossed the Limerick game off to you I can sure see why LOL....Go for it Guy! Light & Love
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Date: 7/21/2009 10:10:00 AM
Gret tribute to your lady,Jared, I am sure! Good read, enjoyed your style. Godly love, Moses! All your comments on my work, are of the finest orchestrated, and totally appreciated!
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Date: 7/19/2009 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations on the feature, well written and fast becoming a fave of mine, you are!
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Date: 7/17/2009 4:27:00 PM
beautiful and oh so sensual. this one deserves to be featured.
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Date: 7/16/2009 6:09:00 AM
Great writing,Jared. Keep the pen moving. Sara
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Date: 7/14/2009 1:56:00 PM
Jared, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 7/13/2009 3:30:00 PM
Jared, congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2009 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations on this featured poetry. More power and God bless. Ernilando
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Date: 7/12/2009 10:49:00 PM
Romantic.. Wow, Great flow of words, this is a very passionate piece. Congrats on your awesome poem being featured this week. You are an incredible poet, please keep writing. Best wishes with your writings. Adeleke
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Date: 7/5/2009 2:27:00 PM
Delightful write Jared>>James
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