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For purposes of publication Nevada Gold may keep its name or be re-titled California Gold.

The trail along which we now ride Was made by folks with visions bold, A westward moving human tide, Who nurtured dreams of farms or gold. From the promise of day’s first light, Through somber sand and sage, they rode In savage heat and gelid night, Bound for the distant Mother Lode. Their deep grooved ruts are now obscure Along the winding desert track Where traveled once the pioneers In some imagined days, way back. For those who passed, the dreams are done; And most who failed left tales untold With wagon wheels and oxen bones And wood crosses above their own. In the debris of that vast land Lay a pink bottle, half in sand, Which sparkled in the twilight gold. It held a faded note which told: “Tis a helluva place where I have died. I did not make it, but I’m glad I tried.” 4/1/19/ 2019 Poetry Marathon Final Placement / Sponsor: Mark Toney

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/17/2019 5:32:00 PM
Was it Vegas the place of reincarnation?
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Date: 4/21/2019 3:51:00 PM
great writing on that period of history when so much was sacrificed for a better life. Congrats on your marathon win, David.
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Date: 4/20/2019 11:11:00 PM
Lovely poem, David. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/20/2019 5:34:00 PM
after 122 days, 27 contests, and 945 submitted poems, my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest has finally come to its end. Congratulations on placing 21st overall in the marathon! There is no provision to denote this in the Standard Contest other than Honorable Mention. Your participation in my contests is much appreciated. ~Mark
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Date: 2/3/2019 7:39:00 PM
David, your word choice is brilliant! The fourth stanza is my favorite, and the last two lines sum up the derring-do of those intrepid souls. Congratulations on your third-place win on Mile 15 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Date: 1/9/2019 2:59:00 PM
I really like this poem. It would work nicely in the coffee table book I am working on if interested in being published. Sandy Powell
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Date: 1/10/2019 5:28:00 PM
Sandy, Thank you for your kind comment. I would certainly consider incorporation of Nevada Gold in uour book as long as I retain my copyright. I am curious about planned layout of pages. Are you thinking of a photograph or painting to associate with each poem? David
Date: 6/21/2018 5:30:00 AM
Great poem David..
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