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- Nest - Pleiades N -

Natural beautiful
Newfound love, roses grow
New moon silver flashes
Nubile young, blushing cheeks
Nice guy, real charmer
Nuts about your sweet kiss
Nothing can change the love







30.04.2017
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
( Pleiades form : N )
www.howmanysyllables.com
For Kim Merryman's contest
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Haight Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 5:55 PM
Wonderful imagery about 'newfound love', Anne-Lise. Congratulations on your fine placement in the Pleiades Contest. Hugs, Sandra
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 7:52 AM
- Nice to receive your congratulations Sandra, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Canerdy Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 5:37 PM
A 7 for your well--deserved win, Anne- lise! Janice
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2017 at 7:51 AM
- Nice to receive your congratulations and a 7, thank you very much Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michaels Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 2:40 AM
Back again to congratulate you on your high-placed win! Well done, Anne-Lise! Regards, John
Andresen Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 12:01 PM
- Thank you very much, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Singh Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 9:09 PM
Very sweetly worded! Congrats on fine win, Anne -Lise!
Andresen Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 12:01 PM
- Thank you very much, Sushma :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 7:30 PM
Congrats on your win Anne
Andresen Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 12:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Merryman Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 5:57 PM
A sweet and romantic Pleiades, Anne-Lise! Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings, Kim
Andresen Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 12:00 PM
- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Marie Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 12:53 AM
The beautiful words you carefully bundle in your 'nest' Anne-Lise, is breathtaking. Truly lovely writing, sweet, fresh imagery, a delight to read. lynnxxx
Andresen Avatar
May 12, 2017 at 3:13 AM
- Dear Lynn, many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
May 10, 2017 at 4:28 PM
A gem of a poem about romance. Awesome . love phyl
Andresen Avatar
May 11, 2017 at 2:07 AM
- A pleasure with your visit, dear Phyllis :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Coreggia Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 4:02 PM
This little jewel of a nest looks like a winner Anne-Lise! A 7:) Amitiés
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 2:28 AM
- Anne-Marie, many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Deo Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 3:43 PM
#7.While fighting for peace, I forgot to read this Anne-Lise. I do apologize I never did fave so many of your great writes. Being fixed/remedied now. I am so sorry ... how we overlook those who truly matter. Shalom, shalom Dear Ambassador. Anil
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2017 at 2:28 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Anil :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Bateman Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 4:12 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, Best of Luck in the contest with "Nest." I'm sure you have a "winner" with this one. Full of love and wonder. Cheers and Best, Gary
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 3:07 AM
- A pleasure with your visit, my friend Gary :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 1:52 PM
Your 'nest', where charm and love abound, is a lovely place to be in, Anne-Lise! Full marks to you! Hugs // paul
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 3:06 AM
- Many thanks Paul, for your visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 12:07 PM
ohh, wonderful love nest, anne... a winner for me..happy huggs
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 3:06 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 7:44 AM
Love in any form of poetry is beautiful. and this is a real winner.Best of luck in the contest Anne-Lise. A 7++ xxx
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2017 at 3:05 AM
- Maria, many thanks for your visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Duggan Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 11:33 PM
How lovely Anne-lise, love wrapped up in seven lines, very clever, hope you are well, take care.......Vera
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 2:41 AM
- Nice to see you, Vera :) - Thank you very much for the comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Murray Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 6:32 PM
I'm nuts about your poems Sunshine.
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 2:39 AM
- Thank you very much, Jean :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pinet Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 6:18 PM
Light, bubbly and full of fun. Well thought out and executed. Emile.
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 2:37 AM
- A pleasure with your visit, Emile :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 4:28 PM
A lovely Pleiades Anne..hugs
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2017 at 2:38 AM
- Thank you very much, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 4:07 PM
very nice, Sunshine. put "a" in front of real charmer, and then you will have your six syllables for line 5!
Andresen Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 4:17 PM
- www.howmanysyllables.com ... count 6 syllables in line 5, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Canerdy Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 1:46 PM
A 7 for this fine poem! Janice
Andresen Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 4:19 PM
- Thank you very much, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michaels Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 1:31 PM
Lovely Pleiades, Anne-Lise! Best of luck with the contest! Regards, John.
Andresen Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 1:40 PM
- A pleasure with your visit :) - Thank you very much, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ricci Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 10:52 AM
Morning Anne. The theme is tops with me for love is for all. Wonderful execution with the format. Good luck with the contest. Well done entirely.
Andresen Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 12:55 PM
- A pleasure with your visit, Lisa :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kannan Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 9:51 AM
So beautiful Anne... Great write... Good luck with the contest... A big 7...
Andresen Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 12:53 PM
- A pleasure with your visit :) - thank you very much, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Green Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 7:33 AM
A beautiful love poem my friend. Nice use of the poetic form, though love poetry is a nice use of any poetic form. :)
Andresen Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 12:54 PM
- A pleasure with your visit, Chris :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Raha Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 2:17 AM
Neautiful poem Anne.
Andresen Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 12:53 PM
- A pleasure with your visit :) - thank you very much, Miraj :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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