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Neon Passenger

Formless Endless Neon passenger Banana Flavored Handsoap dispenseries Forever Forgetting Bubbling memories Longing Emotions In airborn particles Lucid Hazy Dreamlike fragments Always Slipping Soapbubble sideffects Foggy Moonlight Driving to infinity Slumbering Muffling In and out reality

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Chris Green

Date: 10/6/2016 8:16:00 AM

I really enjoyed this. "Soapbubble sideffects" I loved that word usage. really nicely done.

Morgan Ballantyne
Date: 10/6/2016 4:47:00 PM

Thank you! I really wanted to try and write about scent. Which I feel is one of the most intangible senses to convey. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)