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Neon Passenger

Formless
Endless
Neon passenger

Banana
Flavored
Handsoap dispenseries 

Forever
Forgetting
Bubbling memories

Longing
Emotions
In airborn particles

Lucid
Hazy
Dreamlike fragments

Always
Slipping
Soapbubble sideffects

Foggy
Moonlight
Driving to infinity

Slumbering
Muffling
In and out reality

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Chris Green

Date: 10/6/2016 8:16:00 AM

I really enjoyed this. "Soapbubble sideffects" I loved that word usage. really nicely done.

Morgan Ballantyne
Date: 10/6/2016 4:47:00 PM

Thank you! I really wanted to try and write about scent. Which I feel is one of the most intangible senses to convey. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)