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Neon Night

There is a shrill sound in the air But I only hear it on neon nights If it isn’t tinnitus then beware Of the unsettled spirts that fly It’s not just due to the silver season Life and death happen every day We feel hear things for a reason Our bodies and senses anticipate You know how you fuchsia feel When someone stares from behind Eyes devour you like a meal And you’ve sensed it within mind No need to fear your sixth sense It’s good to have such a gift It can be a warning once again Or lead to a unique life shift

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Date: 10/18/2024 1:20:00 PM
Yes, use discernment, stay aware.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/18/2024 1:28:00 PM
Hugs Kim
Date: 10/18/2024 3:06:00 AM
Brilliant message youv passed on here dear karen, i agree we should sometimes listen to our sixth sense. I love neon night, and so much more, the rhymes and flow of depth in this truly stands out! Life , ups and downs, losing loved ones too, all this happen, everyday, and we should sometimes let our inner voice guide us. Loved this powerful poem. Sending you light always
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/18/2024 8:17:00 AM
Hugs dear Ink Empress and I agree the inner voice if healthy should be our guide! Thanks for reading my poems and love and light hugs to you!

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