Neon Night

There is a shrill sound in the air
But I only hear it on neon nights 
If it isn’t tinnitus then beware
Of the unsettled spirts that fly

It’s not just due to the silver season
Life and death happen every day
We feel hear things for a reason 
Our bodies and senses anticipate 

You know how you fuchsia feel
When someone stares from behind 
Eyes devour you like a meal
And you’ve sensed it within mind

No need to fear your sixth sense 
It’s good to have such a gift
It can be a warning once again 
Or lead to a unique life shift

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Date: 10/18/2024 1:20:00 PM
Yes, use discernment, stay aware.
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/18/2024 1:28:00 PM
Hugs Kim
Date: 10/18/2024 3:06:00 AM
Brilliant message youv passed on here dear karen, i agree we should sometimes listen to our sixth sense. I love neon night, and so much more, the rhymes and flow of depth in this truly stands out! Life , ups and downs, losing loved ones too, all this happen, everyday, and we should sometimes let our inner voice guide us. Loved this powerful poem. Sending you light always
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Karen Jones
Date: 10/18/2024 8:17:00 AM
Hugs dear Ink Empress and I agree the inner voice if healthy should be our guide! Thanks for reading my poems and love and light hugs to you!
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