Get Your Premium Membership

Negative Or Positive

Silently yellow touches most Soft sticky scented pollen gold Does it coat wings of Heavenly Host Silently yellow touches most Cars, driveways, porches, garden post Touching my nose sneezing is bold Silently yellow touches most Soft sticky scented pollen gold (For Bees, ants, butterflies pollen is a great treat..For allergy a negative woe..)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 3/29/2011 5:44:00 PM
you seem to enjoy nature, and things that are live... beuatiful positive things
Login to Reply
Date: 3/22/2011 2:22:00 PM
Very charming! ahhhhhhh choo! Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 3/21/2011 4:32:00 AM
thankxx Sara my friend.. u always uplift my spirits .. especially on this rainy rainy day luv.. hoping u are doing much better ...
Login to Reply
Date: 3/21/2011 1:31:00 AM
Sara, Yellow IS my favorite color even if it IS with pollen. Cute poem to read as we are beginning our annual travels to the pharmacy for singulair and accolate. Happy spring. Gwendolen
Login to Reply
Date: 3/20/2011 7:16:00 PM
Lovely Triolette Sara and lovely view of beauty my friend.. cute footnote luv.. hope u are better today ..
Login to Reply
Date: 3/20/2011 4:46:00 PM
One being's meat is another being's poison, Sara/ I am happy seeing you writing
Login to Reply
Date: 3/20/2011 2:45:00 PM
A fun piece, and love the ending! Pollen can be misery for some, but "a great treat" for another. The fruit and flowers would be lost without it.:( Wishing you the best!! Mikki
Login to Reply
Date: 3/20/2011 2:26:00 PM
I liked your note at the bottom you posted with this. And I enjoyed seeing a triolet divided up into stanzas this way. I had never seen that before. Unique!
Login to Reply
Date: 3/20/2011 2:21:00 PM
well said, I usally have a rough April and then it gets better. I work outside all year so I guess I adapt... I hope your feeling better.. prayers still coming your way my dear...luv Michael
Login to Reply
Date: 3/20/2011 2:14:00 PM
Yes, I hear you on this one as I have allergies galore. It is a big woe come spring. Hope you are improving each and every day. love phyl
Login to Reply
Date: 3/20/2011 12:58:00 PM
Yes, the pollen can be a blessing as well as a problem, Sara. I like the way you described it here. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things