Needlepoint

She likes to embroider me -
a subjective needlepoint
yet a realistic arts and crafts.
A long relationship
requires some fine stitching.

I see a broken thumb nail,
a hand greasy with engine oil.
A vinaigrette of my silhouette
cleaning grandpa's old revolver
just because I do sometimes,
just because.

A chipped tooth and beat-up nose
the fist that hit it, now nowhere
to be challenged.

A telltale hint of man-boobs
an old man's wrinkly bottom.
Her fingertips are clear-eyed,
but the images are softened
with a patient love.

She also embroiders
hummingbirds, butterflies
and flowers -
a holy trinity to encircle a baldhead,
the dome of which
she kisses each night.

She composes
all these scraps of my reality
on a broad white cloth
that I am happy to wash
my sleep-fuzzed face with
each morning.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Daniels Avatar
September 20, 2025 at 3:52 PM
Beautiful Eric, very needling & fine pointed ! Enjoyed the line : her fingers are clear eyed. A long relationship requires some fine-stitching > excellent introduction for cadence of poem. ThkU for posting.
Ashford Avatar
September 21, 2025 at 8:04 AM
Thank you Ghairo, this kind feedback that is much appreciated. All the best E.
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