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Ned

He was a beautiful Labrador Crossed with God-knows-what. The very first thing you noticed, The one thing you couldn't help but spot Was the point on the top of his head. A very odd looking protrusion. It made you take a second look In case it was an illusion. But it was real, that point, you see, Protruding from the top of his head. He was a very handsome boy, Our loyal and lovable Ned. He loved us unconditionally From the very first time we met. Protective and loving and always happy (Except when he went to the vet). Part Russian wolfhound we were told, That's where he got his pointed head. Extra room for his smart dog brain, Our wonderful Lab cross ,Ned. for Paula's "What's the Point" contest

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Date: 1/25/2011 4:10:00 AM
Congrats Francine on big win with this 'pointed' creative one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 1/21/2011 7:45:00 PM
Many warm congrats Francine for this wonderful win.
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Date: 1/21/2011 4:00:00 PM
Congrats to you!!!!Enjoyed~God bless~Rick
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Date: 1/21/2011 1:11:00 PM
enjoyed seeing your placment here Francine, best wishes.
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Date: 1/21/2011 12:19:00 PM
Hi Francine - Congratulations on your WIN in Paula's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/21/2011 11:49:00 AM
Congrats Francine on your wonderful win in Paula's contest with this extraordinary entry ... u sure made the point in your lines... enjoy another sweet success with luv and a happy weekend...
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:26:00 AM
Congrats, Francine. Well deserved win. Enjoyed. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 1/21/2011 10:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest. Annalise
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Date: 1/21/2011 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Francine in the "What's The Point" contest by Paula Swanson. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2011 3:33:00 PM
I had a pit bull named Fred who was wonderful around people. He was very intelligent also. His only drawback was he did not like other dogs. He got me in some trouble when he attacked and nearly killed another dog. You have described your Ned quite well here.
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Date: 1/11/2011 10:42:00 AM
lovely poem and 'shure you would have to love' your dog - well done! Liz
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