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Neath Fog's Face Poetic Form: Villanelle "Within the fog the distant mountains strain Bruised in shades of lavender and forest green Each angle decomposing in the rain" Drowning limbs taxes hanging balls, on chain Snaps wide-eyed drying few, tense befalls lean Within the fog the distant mountains strain Sun starved thins, yet sprigs warm in cellophane Dubbed genes circles in, sketched lines its routine Each angle decomposing in the rain Playthings of the gods, thunder, lightning reign Angels whispered mist, Heaven intervene Within the fog the distant mountains strain The grapes wrathful hue amuse the terrain A rainbow struggles for space in between Each angle decomposing in the rain A ray of hope flickers o'er the domain Alas, it sinks, darkness filters the scene Within the fog the distant mountains strain Each angle decomposing in the rain 2021 May 12 *3rd Place* Choose Your Form ~~Joseph May: Judged 2021 May 13

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Date: 5/18/2021 2:57:00 PM
such vivid imagery William, many congrats on your win:-) hug jan xx
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Hilo Poet
Date: 5/18/2021 4:38:00 PM
I appreciate you, Jan, thanks, Aloha!
Date: 5/17/2021 8:01:00 PM
Lovely write, William, I see congratulations are in order. Soup Mail. Hugs Eve
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Date: 5/17/2021 8:11:00 PM
Thanks a lot, Eve, I appreciate you, Aloha!
Date: 5/14/2021 1:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write and picture. Have a blessed day/weekend......................
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Date: 5/14/2021 2:16:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Paula, and may the best be yours too my friend, Aloha!
Date: 5/14/2021 6:07:00 AM
Very nicely penned William, Congrats on your win
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Date: 5/14/2021 10:47:00 AM
Thanks for the opportunity, Joseph, Aloha!
Date: 5/13/2021 2:19:00 PM
Nicely-penned, William. Your poem is rich with vibrant images invoked by the given lines. Great job! Best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 5/13/2021 2:41:00 PM
Thanks, Milt, I forgot to update the particulars -- congrats to you as well my friend, Aloha!
Date: 5/12/2021 10:17:00 PM
So descriptive, William. This theme drew out some beautiful imagery from you.
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Date: 5/12/2021 10:31:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea, hoped you entered Joseph's contest as well my friend, Aloha!

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