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Near Invisible

near invisible
each snow flurry slow and cold
decadent landing

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/12/2024 10:59:00 PM

So creative, Kim. Congrats on a great win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/14/2024 8:12:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Christine K Munsell

Date: 12/12/2024 7:49:00 AM

What a wonderful, gentle image of snow. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/14/2024 8:11:00 PM

Thank you, Christine!

Crystol Woods

Date: 12/10/2024 10:57:00 AM

So descriptive! Congratulations! Xo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/10/2024 12:23:00 PM

Thank you, Crystol!

Valsa George

Date: 12/9/2024 2:59:00 AM

Well done dear Kim. You have made the snow flakes visible. Congratulations on your win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2024 8:06:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa! Warm hugs ~ Kim

Ink Empress

Date: 12/8/2024 11:34:00 PM

I love the last line especially in this dear kim “ decadent landing” what a way to end this snowy wintry and picturesque haiku. And i also love the title. Reading this makes me long to be in snow right now. Congratulations on your win: well deserved placement; you are a natural with this form; sending you light always

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2024 8:05:00 AM

I was blessed with snow flurries on my visit to Minnesota. As soon as I exited the airport and all day. Loved stomping on the crunchy snow. Thank you, Ink!!

Karen Jones

Date: 12/8/2024 11:22:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning haiku!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2024 8:03:00 AM

Thank you, dear Karen!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 12/8/2024 7:43:00 PM

You excel in this form dear poet. Congratulations on your win. Cheers!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/9/2024 8:02:00 AM

Thank you so much! I love brevity poems!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/3/2024 8:26:00 PM

Brrrrrrrrrrrrrr. Some 'can't wait.' I CAN! Li

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/3/2024 9:24:00 PM

Minnesota was so cold…brrr

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/2/2024 11:51:00 PM

Clever how you relate a slow cold snow flurry as invisible. Hubby and I were invited to a wedding a friend of ours whose daughter was getting married, we were strangers among strangers, certain we were invisible that day as we..! Hugs and blessings Kim, JENNIFER.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/3/2024 12:28:00 PM

Thank you for your comment. Enjoyed reading it. I also listened to a story told by a (blind) bible teacher. Her husband brought her into a room of strangers and had to leave for a couple minutes…a whole other level of discomfort. xoxo Kim

Yann Rolland

Date: 12/2/2024 5:47:00 PM

beautiful, subtle and inspiring snow, great poem

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/3/2024 12:26:00 PM

Thank you so much, Yann! :)