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Nd Remembered

devastating fire
flickering flames light dark sky
Paris mourns its loss


Notre Dame destroyed
like a phoenix from ashes  ...
it will rise again

5,7,5, checked with  How Many Syllables



6/5/19

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Caren Krutsinger Date: 6/8/2019 7:33:00 PM It will rise from the ashes; it must. Love this! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/9/2019 4:05:00 AM Thanks Caren:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 6/6/2019 9:17:00 PM I love your entry Jan! This is sure to do well in the contest. I have been ill and have not been answering my emails. I will catch up soon. I am watching my granddaughters too 24/7 while my daughter is away setting up their new home on the Big Island. xxoo Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/7/2019 3:58:00 AM Sorry you are under the weather, me too with a chesty cold but am finally on the mend, not seen mum for over a week. Have fun with the girls, shame they are moving away i hope it works out for them. Didn't place in the contest but it was a last minute entry:-) Hugs jan xx

Michelle Faulkner Date: 6/6/2019 12:24:00 PM Norte Dame will always be lit with eternal flame - beautiful, Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/7/2019 3:57:00 AM lovely comment Michelle:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham Date: 6/6/2019 1:51:00 AM Nice senyry Jan, it was tragic but thankfully no lives lost. Tom Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/6/2019 2:43:00 AM It was a miracle they saved so many artifacts and no one was hurt:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf Date: 6/5/2019 6:23:00 PM Where there is a WILL, there IS a way. Nicely done, Jan. Faith will triumph in the end. :) gw Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/6/2019 2:42:00 AM it will take a long time but it will rise again:-) hugs jan xx

Arturo Michael Date: 6/5/2019 2:57:00 PM A well done reminder of Notre Dame...it's time for a rebirth... Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/5/2019 3:09:00 PM It certainly is a time for rebirth Arturo:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta Date: 6/5/2019 2:51:00 PM Great photos, too! Aloha! Rico Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 6/5/2019 2:56:00 PM thanks Rico, i just put this together at the last minute:-) will never forget son messaging me saying 'have you been to Notre dame I said no son .. he said its not a good place to visit at the moment and then i saw the sad news story breaking, it will be rebuilt of that there is no doubt xx