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devastating fire flickering flames light dark sky Paris mourns its loss Notre Dame destroyed like a phoenix from ashes ... it will rise again 5,7,5, checked with How Many Syllables 6/5/19

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/8/2019 7:33:00 PM

It will rise from the ashes; it must. Love this!

Jan Allison
Date: 6/9/2019 4:05:00 AM

Thanks Caren:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/6/2019 9:17:00 PM

I love your entry Jan! This is sure to do well in the contest. I have been ill and have not been answering my emails. I will catch up soon. I am watching my granddaughters too 24/7 while my daughter is away setting up their new home on the Big Island. xxoo

Jan Allison
Date: 6/7/2019 3:58:00 AM

Sorry you are under the weather, me too with a chesty cold but am finally on the mend, not seen mum for over a week. Have fun with the girls, shame they are moving away i hope it works out for them. Didn't place in the contest but it was a last minute entry:-) Hugs jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 6/6/2019 12:24:00 PM

Norte Dame will always be lit with eternal flame - beautiful, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 6/7/2019 3:57:00 AM

lovely comment Michelle:-) hugs jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/6/2019 1:51:00 AM

Nice senyry Jan, it was tragic but thankfully no lives lost. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 6/6/2019 2:43:00 AM

It was a miracle they saved so many artifacts and no one was hurt:-) hugs jan xx

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/5/2019 6:23:00 PM

Where there is a WILL, there IS a way. Nicely done, Jan. Faith will triumph in the end. :) gw

Jan Allison
Date: 6/6/2019 2:42:00 AM

it will take a long time but it will rise again:-) hugs jan xx

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/5/2019 2:57:00 PM

A well done reminder of Notre Dame...it's time for a rebirth...

Jan Allison
Date: 6/5/2019 3:09:00 PM

It certainly is a time for rebirth Arturo:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/5/2019 2:51:00 PM

Great photos, too! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 6/5/2019 2:56:00 PM

thanks Rico, i just put this together at the last minute:-) will never forget son messaging me saying 'have you been to Notre dame I said no son .. he said its not a good place to visit at the moment and then i saw the sad news story breaking, it will be rebuilt of that there is no doubt xx