Nay Greet For Me Lass

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A Tribute poem to both Robbie Burns and to my own Scottish roots

Nay greet for me, I yet live   
ne'er was I a bairn to ye
mind me ere  I once were    
when drouthy neibors met            
t'were to tak a dram or two          
then tak the gate              
na think on lang miles         
nor of sulky dame              
as frae her ye flee 'd           
na catch'd wi' a skellum       
blethering lik a blellum       
ah lass na greet for me        
by the auld haunt kirk  
auld Nick a towzie tyke
nay catch'd this bogle
who scre'd the pipes and
gart them all a skirl       
til skies a' did dirl
an in cauld hand held a candle
his ain soul now bereft
bides her lass, nay greet for me


translation

 
Do not cry for me, I yet live
never was I a baby to you
mind me as I once was
when thirsty neighbours met
it was to share a dram or two
then take the road home
do not think of long miles
nor of sullen wife
as from her you fled
not to be caught as a waster
rambling like a boaster
do not cry for me lass
by the old haunted church
Old Nick a shaggy dog
could not catch this ghost
who screwed the pipes 
and make them squeal 
until the heavens all ring 
and in his hand a candle held
his ain soul now bereft
bides her, lass do not cry for me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/9/2015 5:45:00 PM
wow, this one your own too. I am impressed!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/9/2015 6:00:00 PM
ty Andrea it is close to my heart my auld scots be a wee bit rousty lol hugs
Date: 6/8/2015 10:57:00 PM
so you translated for that classic poem? I'm so glad to read the second one because I could barely make out the first one. Awesome to think how you have Scottish roots. I am sure I have a "wee bit" of them too!!!
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Date: 6/9/2015 4:11:00 PM
I wrote them both Andrea I just put up a translation for those who do not know old scots I was born in Scotland my mother is pure Scottish my father is half Scottish half English "too = tay" shame you can not hear me recite it lol. hugs
Date: 6/8/2015 11:06:00 AM
I really like these pieces Shadow, very colorful and real.
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Date: 6/8/2015 6:57:00 PM
ty Rick has special meanings for me hugs
Date: 6/6/2015 3:02:00 AM
This is an incredible write. I love it so much. So skilfully delivered, in old Scottish. I love Burns too,but nee understand him without translation. A joy to read. very well done. Pete.
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/6/2015 4:29:00 AM
ty Pete lang time hugs
Date: 6/5/2015 1:19:00 PM
Shadow, this is outstanding, so wonderfully penned 7 and thanks for my awesome win in your comic book contest
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/5/2015 2:46:00 PM
ty Connie hugs
Date: 6/3/2015 5:31:00 AM
lovely write here, my friend - my Scottish isn't very good so was grateful at times for the translation!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/5/2015 2:45:00 PM
ty Jack hugs
Date: 6/1/2015 7:35:00 AM
what a stirring work displaying your sensitive side, shadow... i am amazed by the poignancy of your piece.. huggs
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/1/2015 2:48:00 PM
ty very much Nette hugs
Date: 5/30/2015 3:16:00 AM
Shadow, this conjures in my mind the emotive scenes of a Dickens story. Enjoyed it!
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Date: 6/1/2015 2:47:00 PM
ty Agona hugs
Date: 5/27/2015 7:57:00 PM
Shadow, I'm amazed how you carried the flow in the poem
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Date: 5/28/2015 3:45:00 AM
ty Skat hugs
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