Navel Longings

The heat weighs the air down.. down...
 it say shoosh~ it seemed to steam 
as it wafted from white sand to damp the blue skies.
Long green frond's stir the scene mint in a julep glass.  
Quiet invades each opened pore at high noon
as the froth of salt foam caresses toes
and hollows the sand beneath 
somnambulant sun worshipers.
Gulls circle in silence
as beads of sweat roll from forehead
between the mounds of Aphrodite...
into the navel of longing.



*Woman God's gift to man
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Thompson Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 7:43 PM
You have a beautiful way with words :) taylor
K. Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 11:43 AM
Your title caught my eye and so did this write-- very captivating and sensual, Debbie! Enjoyed the vivid imagery you have here...Sent you soupmail, thank you hugs from your little monkey...
Bunton Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 10:17 AM
I like this!
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 8:48 AM
wow, this is really sensual. Just love the visual. If you added in the moon, it could be for that tropical contest. Was that a rhyming contest? I cannot keep track of everything. I gotta go check it out!!
Falotico Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 8:18 AM
This is Beautiful Debbie!!!! I love this piece...hugs n Luv Michael
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