Naughty Girl

There was a naughty girl 
And what a naughty girl she was! 
For nothing would she ever do
But daydream all day long!
She wouldn’t eat her oatmeal
Instead, would quietly suck her thumb
When came time to dress for school
She wouldn’t comb her hair
She'd much rather munch on a cookie 

Scolded, run to Papa in tears
When the school bell rang at eight
She would be running late
And when walked to her school house
She wouldn’t enter her class!
She spent a whole year sitting in her eldest sister’s class
The nuns, they tried to bribe her
With cookies and some milk
There were times she’d eat the cookies
But wouldn’t drink all the milk!
She was taken on her first field trip  
To the ocean’s shore one day
And Excitement filled those eyes
That widened at the sight of rolling waves  
She screeched endlessly and clapped her hands in play!
On the next day she went willingly to her classroom
And was asked to write about the trip
She held her pencil to paper and wrote 
Her very frst poem at the age of six
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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A   Avatar
January 9, 2013 at 4:05 PM
Annalise, love the poem, and theme... a nice little win i see... always~ PD
K. Avatar
December 29, 2009 at 6:32 AM
Aww, this is really nice, I didn't expect the ending--bravo to you for starting to write poetry at age 6, wow! Merry Christmas & happy 2010 to you Audray--thank you so much for adding my poems to your faves--I feel so honored ^_^ Enjoy your day!
Robbins Aka Gonzo Avatar
December 26, 2009 at 10:15 AM
A good write one that seems thast it might be a window into someone's past being she's a poet. good job
Fraser Avatar
December 25, 2009 at 3:22 AM
Audrey, many congratulations on your placing in Brian's contest, Merry Christmas from Bonnie Scotland >> James,xx
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
December 24, 2009 at 12:15 PM
So, the naughty girl is a poet! Very cute, Audrey.
Delacroix Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 7:46 PM
Congrats on your win in Brian's contest, Audrey. Well deserved. Merry Christmas, Caroline.
Jordan Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 6:42 PM
Audrey - Congratulations on your success in Brian’s contest, wonderful job with this poetic challenge – God Bless, mj
Sweetheart Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 2:39 PM
So from one "naughty girl" to another congrats on your winning poem in Brian's contest... well deserved win Audrey... happy mine placed 7th and to share the spotlight with a great lady as yourself ..blessings... luv... Linda-Marie..
Johnson Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 12:19 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem and thank you for your comments to me. Love, Joyce
George   Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 10:44 AM
And that was the beginning of a great talent. Congratulations on your win, dear Audrey, Love, Lainie
Richards Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 8:14 AM
Such a heart warming story, Audrey! Congratulations on your win! ~ Love, Carrie
Strand Avatar
December 23, 2009 at 1:51 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Audrey.Rgds Brian .My latest contest 'A LITERARY LOVE AFFAIR is now open
Holmes Avatar
December 19, 2009 at 7:07 PM
WOW! this is awsome my birthday was the 17th, the little girl turned out to be a great writer. Thank's 4 your comment and keep up the good work.
Brown Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 5:21 PM
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Sheart Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 3:24 PM
Audrey, Naught girl you, this is just darling hun! You wrote your first poem at six, bless your heart! This poem is just adorable. Thanks for making me smile! Happy Holidays to you and yours. Audrey I too want to thank you for you kind comments on sacred path, it meant a lot to me my friend. Love Light Patty
Guzzi Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 1:46 PM
just lovely and precious! light & Love
Jordan Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 1:36 PM
Audrey you certainly nailed this poem - Hon both of your soup mails didn't come through - I don't know why it says something about a "virtual path." loved this poem - God Bless, mj
Fraser Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 1:07 PM
Excellent Audrey, you naughty girl >> James
Kendrick Avatar
December 18, 2009 at 10:50 AM
Good write that should do well in the contest. Keep the creative and magical pen flowing. Sara
Strand Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 11:50 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Audrey.Rgds Brian
Delacroix Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 8:57 PM
Nice write, a reminiscence to a moment long past that began your poetry writing. Awesome! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comments on my poem today. Merry Christmas and happy new year to you too. Caroline.
Owens Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 7:43 PM
This is so cute and nice..Enjoyed...good luck in the contest...Marty
Sweetheart Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 4:41 PM
Great write and good luck in Brian's contest... sounds like me a little .. I started writing around age 8 so kindred spirits are we... enjoyed your bio... blessings.. luv... I think u already read mine .. Simply ME on ME for my entry... this is such a fun contest... Linda-Marie...
Haick Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 2:43 PM
No, Carolyn, not all my life or I would be a pro by now!! Wrote my first poem at 6 years old, "A Day at the Beach". Love yu, Audrey
Loving Iii Avatar
December 17, 2009 at 2:24 PM
and i suppose this naughty girl is you. still naughty. jhl
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