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Nature's Untold Sorrow

Dew drops
tiny misty
nature's untold sorrow
whispering deep sigh silently
grass tips



© kashinath karmakar 2011
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Placement:3rd;(September 2011)

Contest:How Due You Dew

Sponsor:Paula Swanson

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 17, 2011 at 12:12 AM

Congrats Kash on another super win with this ultra fine poetry my friend...luv..

Joyce Johnson

September 15, 2011 at 11:20 PM

Very pretty. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Lee Ramage

September 15, 2011 at 10:38 PM

Very nice, I would have never thought about this subject for the 'dew'. Well done and congratulations on your win. Keep your poems coming. Lee

Elizabeth Wesley

September 15, 2011 at 10:09 AM

What a lovely way to tell of nature's sorrow - touches my heart with gentle feeling.

Nette Onclaud

September 14, 2011 at 3:27 AM

theer you go, akshi... anither splendid verse..a joy to read with congrats on your glowing win! :) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

September 13, 2011 at 9:34 PM

I'm so happy THIS One placed, KAsh. It's pure loveliness.soupmail.

Francine Roberts

September 13, 2011 at 8:51 PM

many congrats Kash on your 3rd place win with this beautiful entry

Lori Lucas Mcclure

September 13, 2011 at 8:22 PM

Congratulaions on your amazing win!!!!!!!!!!--------Lori

Don Johnson

September 13, 2011 at 7:20 PM

dew drops like tear drops, whisper an sigh, great poetry mate

Carolyn Devonshire

September 13, 2011 at 5:26 PM

Congratulations on your win, Kash. I never before thought of dew as nature's tears. This is brilliant! Love, carolyn

David Williams

September 13, 2011 at 1:32 PM

Kash, thanks again, if we were neighbours i would buy you a drink..David

Carrie Richards

September 13, 2011 at 11:39 AM

Breathtaking, and beautiful, Kathinath...congratulations...so nice to share the spot with you!! :)

Debbie Guzzi

September 13, 2011 at 11:31 AM

so little but so much charm ;) Congrad's Light & Love

Jack Horne

September 13, 2011 at 11:29 AM

Lovely write, my friend

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 13, 2011 at 11:19 AM

CONGRATS KASH ON THIRD PLACE WIN FOR THIS EXCELLENT POETRY LUV..

Jack Horne

September 13, 2011 at 10:22 AM

My apologies for missing so many contest results - many congrats on all your wins : )

Dinda Minardi

September 13, 2011 at 9:42 AM

Wow. This is a simple yet amazing write. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 13, 2011 at 8:28 AM

Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "How Due You Dew" contest Kashinath. Love,Carol

David Williams

September 13, 2011 at 3:57 AM

hey Kash congrats on your win, well deserved..David

Gwendolen Song

September 13, 2011 at 3:21 AM

Hi Kash~ I think I shall study how to write the perfect cinquain from reading yours! Congrats on this win and many others recently! Amazing stuff! I didn't read Nette's blog til after I messed mine up... :) Hope you are doing great... untold sorrow...a deep sigh....then a tear drop as dew!!! Cooooool write. Gwendolen