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Nature's Untold Sorrow

Dew drops
tiny misty
nature's untold sorrow
whispering deep sigh silently
grass tips



© kashinath karmakar 2011
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Placement:3rd;(September 2011)

Contest:How Due You Dew

Sponsor:Paula Swanson

Copyright © Kash Poet | Year Posted 2011

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/17/2011 12:12:00 AM Congrats Kash on another super win with this ultra fine poetry my friend...luv.. Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 9/15/2011 11:20:00 PM Very pretty. Congratulations. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Lee Ramage Date: 9/15/2011 10:38:00 PM Very nice, I would have never thought about this subject for the 'dew'. Well done and congratulations on your win. Keep your poems coming. Lee Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 9/15/2011 10:09:00 AM What a lovely way to tell of nature's sorrow - touches my heart with gentle feeling. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 9/14/2011 3:27:00 AM theer you go, akshi... anither splendid verse..a joy to read with congrats on your glowing win! :) huggs Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/13/2011 9:34:00 PM I'm so happy THIS One placed, KAsh. It's pure loveliness.soupmail. Login to Reply

Francine Roberts Date: 9/13/2011 8:51:00 PM many congrats Kash on your 3rd place win with this beautiful entry Login to Reply

Lori Lucas Mcclure Date: 9/13/2011 8:22:00 PM Congratulaions on your amazing win!!!!!!!!!!--------Lori Login to Reply

Don Johnson Date: 9/13/2011 7:20:00 PM dew drops like tear drops, whisper an sigh, great poetry mate Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 9/13/2011 5:26:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Kash. I never before thought of dew as nature's tears. This is brilliant! Love, carolyn Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 9/13/2011 1:32:00 PM Kash, thanks again, if we were neighbours i would buy you a drink..David Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 9/13/2011 11:39:00 AM Breathtaking, and beautiful, Kathinath...congratulations...so nice to share the spot with you!! :) Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 9/13/2011 11:31:00 AM so little but so much charm ;) Congrad's Light & Love Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 9/13/2011 11:29:00 AM Lovely write, my friend Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 9/13/2011 11:19:00 AM CONGRATS KASH ON THIRD PLACE WIN FOR THIS EXCELLENT POETRY LUV.. Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 9/13/2011 10:22:00 AM My apologies for missing so many contest results - many congrats on all your wins : ) Login to Reply

Dinda Minardi Date: 9/13/2011 9:42:00 AM Wow. This is a simple yet amazing write. Congrats on your well deserved win. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 9/13/2011 8:28:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "How Due You Dew" contest Kashinath. Love,Carol Login to Reply

David Williams Date: 9/13/2011 3:57:00 AM hey Kash congrats on your win, well deserved..David Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 9/13/2011 3:21:00 AM Hi Kash~ I think I shall study how to write the perfect cinquain from reading yours! Congrats on this win and many others recently! Amazing stuff! I didn't read Nette's blog til after I messed mine up... :) Hope you are doing great... untold sorrow...a deep sigh....then a tear drop as dew!!! Cooooool write. Gwendolen Login to Reply

Barbara Gorelick Date: 9/12/2011 7:49:00 PM So sweet...well done. BG Login to Reply

Anula Aboobacker Date: 9/12/2011 6:43:00 PM these lines just pulled some strings in my heart... loved it :) waiting for more... Login to Reply