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Nature's Untold Sorrow

Dew drops tiny misty nature's untold sorrow whispering deep sigh silently grass tips © kashinath karmakar 2011 ==================== Placement:3rd;(September 2011) Contest:How Due You Dew Sponsor:Paula Swanson

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/17/2011 12:12:00 AM

Congrats Kash on another super win with this ultra fine poetry my friend...luv..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/15/2011 11:20:00 PM

Very pretty. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Lee Ramage

Date: 9/15/2011 10:38:00 PM

Very nice, I would have never thought about this subject for the 'dew'. Well done and congratulations on your win. Keep your poems coming. Lee

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 9/15/2011 10:09:00 AM

What a lovely way to tell of nature's sorrow - touches my heart with gentle feeling.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/14/2011 3:27:00 AM

theer you go, akshi... anither splendid verse..a joy to read with congrats on your glowing win! :) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2011 9:34:00 PM

I'm so happy THIS One placed, KAsh. It's pure loveliness.soupmail.

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/13/2011 8:51:00 PM

many congrats Kash on your 3rd place win with this beautiful entry

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 9/13/2011 8:22:00 PM

Congratulaions on your amazing win!!!!!!!!!!--------Lori

Don Johnson

Date: 9/13/2011 7:20:00 PM

dew drops like tear drops, whisper an sigh, great poetry mate

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/13/2011 5:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Kash. I never before thought of dew as nature's tears. This is brilliant! Love, carolyn

David Williams

Date: 9/13/2011 1:32:00 PM

Kash, thanks again, if we were neighbours i would buy you a drink..David

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/13/2011 11:39:00 AM

Breathtaking, and beautiful, Kathinath...congratulations...so nice to share the spot with you!! :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/13/2011 11:31:00 AM

so little but so much charm ;) Congrad's Light & Love

Jack Horne

Date: 9/13/2011 11:29:00 AM

Lovely write, my friend

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/13/2011 11:19:00 AM

CONGRATS KASH ON THIRD PLACE WIN FOR THIS EXCELLENT POETRY LUV..

Jack Horne

Date: 9/13/2011 10:22:00 AM

My apologies for missing so many contest results - many congrats on all your wins : )

Dinda Minardi

Date: 9/13/2011 9:42:00 AM

Wow. This is a simple yet amazing write. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/13/2011 8:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Paula Swanson's "How Due You Dew" contest Kashinath. Love,Carol

David Williams

Date: 9/13/2011 3:57:00 AM

hey Kash congrats on your win, well deserved..David

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/13/2011 3:21:00 AM

Hi Kash~ I think I shall study how to write the perfect cinquain from reading yours! Congrats on this win and many others recently! Amazing stuff! I didn't read Nette's blog til after I messed mine up... :) Hope you are doing great... untold sorrow...a deep sigh....then a tear drop as dew!!! Cooooool write. Gwendolen

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/12/2011 7:49:00 PM

So sweet...well done. BG

Anula Aboobacker

Date: 9/12/2011 6:43:00 PM

these lines just pulled some strings in my heart... loved it :) waiting for more...