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Nature's Storm

an inward battle
anxiety leads to stress
then acid reflux

Edward J. Ebbs - February 9, 2016

Written for a Contest, Haiku 102
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 5:34 PM
that 's great comparing it to acid reflux!!!
Bickerstaffe Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 8:47 AM
Very well done Edward... you took me by surprise there! Nature's storm indeed! Brilliant 575 SENRYU. Best wishes, Keith
Leiser Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 8:39 PM
Ha haaaH! This is so funny! Great job, Ed :)
Allison Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 2:48 PM
oh so true Ed:-) hugs jan xx
Trifiatis Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 7:28 AM
It must have been some battle, my friend, Edward. Certain am I , victorious you have emerged out of this! Excellent!
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