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Nature's Sanctity

.       worshipping limbs sway
               holy leaves lay on stained rocks
                       canopy of saints

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Kelly Mcdonald

Date: 10/17/2009 12:26:00 PM

Congratulations.......truly beautiful

Ismael Nieves

Date: 10/14/2009 8:10:00 AM

CONGRATS! well composed.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 10/8/2009 6:08:00 AM

congrats on the win, wonderful

Elaine George

Date: 10/8/2009 1:44:00 AM

AWESOME! haiku, Abe. congratulations on your first place win. Love, Lainie

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/6/2009 10:21:00 AM

Super congrats on the first place win :) Such a wonderfully unique haiku :)

Brandee Augustus

Date: 10/4/2009 4:50:00 PM

Nice! I love how you were able to see nature through the eyes of God. Since it is His creation, this haiku is perfect. I really, really love the first line! Congratulations on your first place win!!!!

Date: 10/1/2009 12:19:00 PM

I really liked this the first time I read it. Congratulations on your 1st place finish. Way to go! Hope you are enjoying your honor. Wishing you continued success. Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/1/2009 8:40:00 AM

Congratulations dear Abe, this beautiful poem so well deserving the place of honor in the contest!! Well done dear friend!!!! Love, Carrie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/1/2009 6:14:00 AM

Great 1st place win in Raul's Contest!! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/1/2009 4:06:00 AM

Congratulations on winning 1st place in Raul's contest Abe. Love, Carol

Corinne Curcio

Date: 10/1/2009 3:01:00 AM

Congratulations Abe. A gorgeous haiku

Brian Strand

Date: 10/1/2009 1:19:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Abe.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/30/2009 11:51:00 PM

Abe, congrats on your big win in my contest...Raul

Moonbee Canady

Date: 9/15/2009 4:53:00 PM

Abe... This One's going into my Fav's... Here's Why... These Three Lines Say... If limbs and leaves and rocks do what they were designed to do and praise their Maker... how much more so, should Sanctioned, Intelligent Creatures?... Beautiful Write... MoonBee

James Fraser

Date: 9/14/2009 1:44:00 PM

Excellent Haiku Abe>>James

Brian Strand

Date: 9/13/2009 12:37:00 AM

Best wishes with this one Abe.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

Nathan Leccese

Date: 9/10/2009 11:08:00 PM

"canopy of saints" That line just sayes so much in this Haiku and it sums it up very well. Great job Abe. Thanks for your comments and support in my contest. Nate

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 9/10/2009 5:48:00 PM

beautiful imagery in this haiku Abe! Good luck! Thank you for your comments also! ~Trudy~

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/10/2009 1:46:00 PM

Complete serenity and beauty to this haiku....what an awesome entry to Raul's contest!! ps..soupmail :)

Date: 9/10/2009 1:20:00 PM

Interesting view captured in just three lines. Nice use of personification. So much depth in your words. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comments. Keep on writing!!!!!! Karen

Corinne Curcio

Date: 9/10/2009 9:37:00 AM

This is absolutely beautiful Abe. A gorgeous haiku

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 9/10/2009 7:29:00 AM

beautiful Abe. Thank you always for your kind comments. Hugs.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/10/2009 4:48:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku Abe. I wish you the best in Raul's contest. Thank you my friend for your kind comments. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

Date: 9/10/2009 12:03:00 AM

Nice work here Abe.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

Robin L. Gass

Date: 9/9/2009 6:24:00 PM

This is beautiful, Abe. I agree with Carolyn, it does sound like a cathederal. Such a lovely image. Thank you for your warm and thoughtful comment. I have missed everyone and I see I have lots of catching up to do. I am so happy to be back "home". Good luck! Love, Robin

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