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Nature's Sanctity

.       worshipping limbs sway
               holy leaves lay on stained rocks
                       canopy of saints

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Kelly Mcdonald

October 17, 2009 at 12:26 PM

Congratulations.......truly beautiful

Ismael Nieves

October 14, 2009 at 8:10 AM

CONGRATS! well composed.

Doris Culverhouse

October 8, 2009 at 6:08 AM

congrats on the win, wonderful

Elaine George

October 8, 2009 at 1:44 AM

AWESOME! haiku, Abe. congratulations on your first place win. Love, Lainie

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

October 6, 2009 at 10:21 AM

Super congrats on the first place win :) Such a wonderfully unique haiku :)

Brandee Augustus

October 4, 2009 at 4:50 PM

Nice! I love how you were able to see nature through the eyes of God. Since it is His creation, this haiku is perfect. I really, really love the first line! Congratulations on your first place win!!!!

October 1, 2009 at 12:19 PM

I really liked this the first time I read it. Congratulations on your 1st place finish. Way to go! Hope you are enjoying your honor. Wishing you continued success. Karen

Carrie Richards

October 1, 2009 at 8:40 AM

Congratulations dear Abe, this beautiful poem so well deserving the place of honor in the contest!! Well done dear friend!!!! Love, Carrie

Debbie Guzzi

October 1, 2009 at 6:14 AM

Great 1st place win in Raul's Contest!! Light & Love

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 1, 2009 at 4:06 AM

Congratulations on winning 1st place in Raul's contest Abe. Love, Carol

Corinne Curcio

October 1, 2009 at 3:01 AM

Congratulations Abe. A gorgeous haiku

Brian Strand

October 1, 2009 at 1:19 AM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Abe.Rgds Brian

Raul Moreno

September 30, 2009 at 11:51 PM

Abe, congrats on your big win in my contest...Raul

Moonbee Canady

September 15, 2009 at 4:53 PM

Abe... This One's going into my Fav's... Here's Why... These Three Lines Say... If limbs and leaves and rocks do what they were designed to do and praise their Maker... how much more so, should Sanctioned, Intelligent Creatures?... Beautiful Write... MoonBee

James Fraser

September 14, 2009 at 1:44 PM

Excellent Haiku Abe>>James

Brian Strand

September 13, 2009 at 12:37 AM

Best wishes with this one Abe.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.

Nathan Leccese

September 10, 2009 at 11:08 PM

"canopy of saints" That line just sayes so much in this Haiku and it sums it up very well. Great job Abe. Thanks for your comments and support in my contest. Nate

Trudy Diane Rider

September 10, 2009 at 5:48 PM

beautiful imagery in this haiku Abe! Good luck! Thank you for your comments also! ~Trudy~

Carrie Richards

September 10, 2009 at 1:46 PM

Complete serenity and beauty to this haiku....what an awesome entry to Raul's contest!! ps..soupmail :)

September 10, 2009 at 1:20 PM

Interesting view captured in just three lines. Nice use of personification. So much depth in your words. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind comments. Keep on writing!!!!!! Karen

Corinne Curcio

September 10, 2009 at 9:37 AM

This is absolutely beautiful Abe. A gorgeous haiku

Izzy Gumbo

September 10, 2009 at 7:29 AM

beautiful Abe. Thank you always for your kind comments. Hugs.

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 10, 2009 at 4:48 AM

Wonderful Haiku Abe. I wish you the best in Raul's contest. Thank you my friend for your kind comments. Love, Carol

Brian Strand

September 10, 2009 at 12:03 AM

Nice work here Abe.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today

Robin L. Gass

September 9, 2009 at 6:24 PM

This is beautiful, Abe. I agree with Carolyn, it does sound like a cathederal. Such a lovely image. Thank you for your warm and thoughtful comment. I have missed everyone and I see I have lots of catching up to do. I am so happy to be back "home". Good luck! Love, Robin

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