Natures Promise

rainbows taste the rain
over my shoulder the Son
recalls God’s promise
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 9:40 PM
what a great haiku on God's promise to us.
Dillenbeck Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 3:47 PM
Bill This rainbow soars overhead, expressing my appreciation for nature's well-articulated Promise. Same subject and objective as "Quintessential PlaceHolders", but without all that distracting math and science. Thanks for visiting my less concise world, and for thereby inviting me into yours.
Allison Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 2:28 PM
This is truly beautiful Bill:-) hugs Jan xx
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