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Natures Paradise

The ocean turning

                      is our jacuzzi now

                                              to heat up and play..

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2012 8:58:00 PM

love the image,,, hot and steamy... bet you love it...pd

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2010 12:38:00 PM

Yes this is cool... Yes this is hot... Yes I luv this... lets heat up and play .. amazing line..Michael... u have such cretivity and visual ability to see it happen and paint the picture in words..luv.. so sultry.. enjoyed...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2010 12:38:00 PM

Package mailed so be on lookout luv..

James Fraser

Date: 9/5/2010 11:31:00 AM

Wonderful Haiku Michael >> James

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/5/2010 11:17:00 AM

great thoughts!! don't let it suck you out to sea though! is the weather bad at your home? I love rainbows...the rainbow clouds are a new view for me over the past 3 years...every time I see something new in nature I think how big is God?? How loved we are!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/5/2010 8:59:00 AM

Great jacuzzi..Enjoyed this Haiku very much..I can just hear the sounds of the surf..Your comments on my work and my blog helped make my morning go so much better..I appreciate you spending time reading what I have to say..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/5/2010 8:58:00 AM

Wonderful haiku with nice images, Michael

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/5/2010 8:01:00 AM

nice one

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/5/2010 8:00:00 AM

Indeed, the water is warm as a jacuzzi in Florida now, Michael. It should be cooling down soon up North. Great haiku and a fun image! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/5/2010 8:00:00 AM

Michael love the images in your haiku, what an interesting way to think of the ocean.. Hope you are enjoying your Sunday.. Luv Wilma Ps: you made me laugh / smile with your comments today

Constance La France

Date: 9/5/2010 7:23:00 AM

very visual, I can just see that steam from the jacuzzi, but burrrrr, it is so cold in Ottawa, Canada today, I am actually thinking of turning on the heat, have my fuzzy socks on and clinging to my blankie.... love constance