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August.2.2024
F Form Free Verse Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Constance La France

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“A life of disharmony with nature will dehumanize us. Never ignore nature’s power to heal and restore and fuel us with new enthusiasm. The younger generation, glued to the cyber space do not know what they truly miss.” ~ By Poet. have you ever been into a forest? do you seek solace in nature’s lap? in my loneliness, I often turn to nature. in her soothing embrace, I find such joy. Today, into the woodlands, I leisurely walked, where trees grew huddling one another. they talked to me in a lingua, that I could easily understand. rustling leaves whispered love’s enchantments in my ear. I felt they were my friends of a primordial age. the birdsongs were a balm for my soul. and my mind too joined in their symphony. in hidden glades, I saw a world of flowers thriving, they bloomed and blushed in silence. unattended and unnoticed, they will wither in a day or two. this thought left me sad for a moment, and Thomas Gray’s famous lines, in ‘The Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard’ came to my mind. I saw wild orchids of creamy white and bright orange. below some trees, I noticed a wild array of daylilies, nodding and dancing delightfully in the breeze. their sweet fragrance came wafting into my nose. around them, I saw bees and butterflies, reeling round. from far I heard the babbling of a brook. its soft murmur was at once soothing and alluring. I could see its glimmer as it wound its way, through jutting rocks and crevices. as I stood losing myself in the serenity of the place, forgetting all the noisy cacophony of the streets, I felt my cracks and scars quickly being healed, by mother nature’s soothing embrace!

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Date: 9/21/2024 11:03:00 AM
Dearest Valsa, I love the last stanza where you feel the healing power in nature's hands! This reflective and deeply introspective poem takes me on your healing journey by "jutting rocks and crevices," to a talking "brook," in the company of bees and butterflies. There can be no greater invitation to serenity. Congratulations on your win. Sending you blessings of serenity, dear friend! May you continue to "thrive."
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Date: 8/7/2024 9:44:00 AM
Valsa, congratulations on your win in my contest, I enjoyed your poem a lot, well done love the image and quote, Constance
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Date: 8/5/2024 9:29:00 AM
You use your five senses to appreciate a fabulous poem. I almost felt I was there in a forest seeing, hearing, and smelling the fragrance everywhere. A beautiful poem worthy of high placement.
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Date: 8/3/2024 6:33:00 AM
I felt like i saw the flowers dancing and heard the songs of nature as you took us on a journey, with your well woven words, flowing in such captivating cadence in the most touching manner free flowing like a river of soothing lines … ah i especially love your opening lines “in my loneliness, I often turn to nature. in her soothing embrace, I find such joy.” Yea often in loneliness and when in despair, we often search for comfort from nature and all immaterial things. This is just gorgeous and a FAVE for me
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Date: 8/2/2024 5:54:00 PM
flowing with melodic lines wc honor nature's healing wonders...amazing, valsa!
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Date: 8/2/2024 11:21:00 AM
Dear Valsa... Your poem is a serene and evocative journey through the forest, capturing the gentle solace that nature offers. The imagery of trees "huddling" and speaking in a familiar "lingua" conveys a deep sense of connection and belonging with the natural world. The lines describing the flowers, unnoticed yet beautiful, poignantly reflect on the ephemeral beauty of life, mirroring the melancholy in Thomas Gray's "Elegy Written in a Country Churchyard."
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Date: 8/2/2024 10:22:00 AM
What a wonderful quote/write with a pretty picture. Mother nature can be healed/is healing. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...................
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Date: 8/2/2024 9:17:00 AM
Beautiful nature poem. Like your artistic writing.Kudos.
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