Natures Cycle - Rain Revised

Rain drops fall on the window pane
Drenching, quenching earth's thirst.
Caught by the river, rushing toward the sea.
The river's mouth kisses the salty delta 
Run toward open water, pushing out to sea.

Salt water rises in tropical heat,
Condensing into billowy, briny forms
Pushed by a powerful westerly flow 
Clouds drop their gifts back onto the glass
Rain drops gently from the sky.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 11, 2012 at 2:51 PM
You get it to listen to great with rain in your lovely poem Ann. We need rain....but I prefer the sunshine. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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