Shadow Hamilton Poet Narrative

nature's cry

Listen  to her sobs she is crying because of pollution for the damage that is being done. Hundreds of chemicals that human kind release each day poisoning the atmosphere. also they poison things like the Great Barrier Reef it lies there going grey dying over halve of it lost maybe for ever. Then the fish and other things become existent so it goes on up the chain. We now at more danger than ever before our planet is near the point from which it can not continue to recover. When will we make the changes needed? To have clean water to drink, food that is not full of harmful chemicals and we can safely breathe? Time I feel 
is ticking down faster and faster. dont let it get to us being the ones that killed our beautiful Planet

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Suzanne Delaney January 1, 2024 at 4:18 PM I agree, Shadow. Mankind’s insatiable consumerism is destroying the environment. Sad but true, SuZ

Bill Baker December 16, 2023 at 10:21 PM A very mindful Narrative poem, Shadow. Thanks for helping to get the message out. A poet friend in Texas, Bill Shadow Hamilton December 18, 2023 at 2:35 PM ty Bill we need to do something and soon Hugs Shadow

Silent One December 16, 2023 at 11:33 AM It is very sad what is happening and a lot of people are not taking it seriously.. this is an excellent narrative and great way of raising awareness... Shadow Hamilton December 16, 2023 at 11:56 AM Ty dearest Silent One I know but I doubt they will take it seriously in time hugs Shadow

Sotto Poet December 16, 2023 at 10:54 AM Strong writing that is conveyed well I truly liked this. It is deeply moving and accurate, dear shadow. When the pendulum turns, any injuries that it was inflicted must be mended by people's hands. Shadow Hamilton December 16, 2023 at 11:52 AM as long as it comes soon dear Sotto I feel we nearly are out of time ty for caring hugs Shadow

Lin Lane December 16, 2023 at 8:22 AM Brutal, the humans who lay waste to Mother Earth. The hourglass must turn and only human hands can heal the wounds they've made. A needed reminder, Shadow. Shadow Hamilton December 16, 2023 at 11:49 AM I agree with you Lin unfortunately those with the power to do so only care about their pockets So sad but true hugs Shadow

Hiya Sharma December 16, 2023 at 7:37 AM Sigh.. You've so evocatively reflected the emotions of our nature here, how she sobs because of the adversities humans have committed against her. This write is really soul stirring and heart-touching, dear Shadow. Truly a fav, beautifully done! Shadow Hamilton December 16, 2023 at 11:43 AM ty Hiya pleased to meet and ty for your heart warming comments hugs Shadow

Ink Empress December 16, 2023 at 6:50 AM So true and profound this is dear shadow. Powerful write well delivered I absolutely loved this. Definitely a fave for me. Every word in this touched my soul and flows in such eloquence. Sending you light always Shadow Hamilton December 16, 2023 at 6:57 AM ty ink so much your comments are valuable to me Hugs Shadow