Malabika Ray Choudhury Poet Dizain

Nature's Charm

glorious world slowly waking up bright,  
                        after a biting frosty winter dream 
                       tiny buds glistening .. surreal sight, 
                    strolling soft on gentle glossy grass gleam  
                      arriving stunning splendiferous Spring !  
                    chilly winter leaves with shimmering snow,  
                             flowers create luxurious fresco  
                    watch nature's dazzling harmonious charm, 
                         Bluebells and Daffodils joyfully glow 
                      admire bird-songs, melodious and warm !


                             
                                      October 18, 2022
                                   Dizain Poetry Contest
                                      Theme: Nature
                              Syllables checked by HMS.com
                                    Sponsor: Sotto Poet

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Sara Kendrick November 7, 2022 at 12:24 PM Congratulations on this charming winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara

Christuraj Alex November 6, 2022 at 5:17 AM Your writings on nature are, indeed, great. This is one of them. Congratulations! Malabika Ray Choudhury April 28, 2026 at 4:07 PM Thank you, Christuraj. Sorry for not replying at the right time.

Sotto Poet November 5, 2022 at 8:31 AM Congratulations on your wonderful context win. You have composed such an excellent poem. Malabika Ray Choudhury November 5, 2022 at 9:18 AM Thank you, Dear Poet. Glad to participate.

Bill Baker October 26, 2022 at 4:07 PM Excellent form for your Dizain, Mala. Your imagery brings your poetry to life! Write On! my friend. Hugs, Bill Malabika Ray Choudhury October 26, 2022 at 4:09 PM Thanks, Bill. Your visit is a delight! Your comment really inspire me!

Valsa George October 25, 2022 at 2:30 AM Spring is so very alive and beautiful in your lovely poem. The 'fresco of flowers and the world waking up from a frosty winter dream'.... such a wonderful feel it lends to the poem. Beautiful, Mala. All the Best in the contest! Malabika Ray Choudhury October 25, 2022 at 7:26 AM Thank you, Valsa. How much we love the onset of Spring when the snow melts! In this part of the world, winter is really harsh... Spring truly heals the human spirit. Appreciate your delightful visit and comment. Love ~ Mala

Michelle Faulkner October 21, 2022 at 12:28 PM This is truly a charmer, I like the combination of winter white and spring colors, best wishes for the contest~ Malabika Ray Choudhury October 21, 2022 at 3:45 PM Thank you, Michelle. My favourite time of the year is...when the snow melts, and I can hear birds chirping at the onset of Spring. Love ~ Mala

Eve Roper October 18, 2022 at 7:13 PM Great imagery of winter, Malabika. Sending you blessings and a warm hug Malabika Ray Choudhury October 18, 2022 at 7:16 PM Thanks, Eve. A warm hug for you too. Love ~ Mala