Nature's Charm

glorious world slowly waking up bright, after a biting frosty winter dream tiny buds glistening .. surreal sight, strolling soft on gentle glossy grass gleam arriving stunning splendiferous Spring ! chilly winter leaves with shimmering snow, flowers create luxurious fresco watch nature's dazzling harmonious charm, Bluebells and Daffodils joyfully glow admire bird-songs, melodious and warm ! October 18, 2022 Dizain Poetry Contest Theme: Nature Syllables checked by HMS.com Sponsor: Sotto Poet

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/7/2022 12:24:00 PM

Congratulations on this charming winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara

Christuraj Alex

Date: 11/6/2022 5:17:00 AM

Your writings on nature are, indeed, great. This is one of them. Congratulations!

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/5/2022 8:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful context win. You have composed such an excellent poem.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/5/2022 9:18:00 AM

Thank you, Dear Poet. Glad to participate.

Bill Baker

Date: 10/26/2022 4:07:00 PM

Excellent form for your Dizain, Mala. Your imagery brings your poetry to life! Write On! my friend. Hugs, Bill

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/26/2022 4:09:00 PM

Thanks, Bill. Your visit is a delight! Your comment really inspire me!

Valsa George

Date: 10/25/2022 2:30:00 AM

Spring is so very alive and beautiful in your lovely poem. The 'fresco of flowers and the world waking up from a frosty winter dream'.... such a wonderful feel it lends to the poem. Beautiful, Mala. All the Best in the contest!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/25/2022 7:26:00 AM

Thank you, Valsa. How much we love the onset of Spring when the snow melts! In this part of the world, winter is really harsh... Spring truly heals the human spirit. Appreciate your delightful visit and comment. Love ~ Mala

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/21/2022 12:28:00 PM

This is truly a charmer, I like the combination of winter white and spring colors, best wishes for the contest~

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/21/2022 3:45:00 PM

Thank you, Michelle. My favourite time of the year is...when the snow melts, and I can hear birds chirping at the onset of Spring. Love ~ Mala

Eve Roper

Date: 10/18/2022 7:13:00 PM

Great imagery of winter, Malabika. Sending you blessings and a warm hug

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/18/2022 7:16:00 PM

Thanks, Eve. A warm hug for you too. Love ~ Mala