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Line's Bitesize No 123 contest ~ September 12, 2025

Nature's Bold Artistry

Limbs still cling to their withering leaves.
Shimmering in sunlight like flames of fire,
they flutter in the morning breeze.
Autumn's splendor is Nature's masterpiece,
painted in shades of russet and gold.

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Terry Miller September 23, 2025 at 12:01 AM Fantastic imagery, congratulations Lin Lane September 25, 2025 at 3:10 PM Thanks so very much, Terry.

Deb M September 16, 2025 at 2:43 AM Beautifully written Lin….Debx Lin Lane September 25, 2025 at 3:10 PM Thanks, ms, sweetie!

Duke Beaufort September 15, 2025 at 9:30 AM Lin, I agree with what Tom, Paula, and Hilda say. We will certainly enjoy the show. Missing seeing the picture right now since the site seems messed up in that regard....unless it's only me??? Lin Lane September 25, 2025 at 3:09 PM Sometimes the pictures I use disappear and I've not figured out why or how to prevent that from happening. C'est la guerre! Thanks, Duke.

Hilda Greenhough September 13, 2025 at 8:48 PM This is a very accurate description of trees in autumn. The bright red leaves don't last long. I enjoyed this picturesque verse. Lin Lane September 25, 2025 at 3:08 PM I'm waaayyy late responding, but my thanks are sincere.

Paula Goldsmith September 13, 2025 at 12:03 PM Your "Nature's Bold Artistry" is a lovely write with a pretty picture. Great last two lines. "Good Luck" Have a lovely day/weekend writing Lin Lane September 13, 2025 at 12:35 PM Thanks a bunch. Paula!

Tom Cunningham September 12, 2025 at 9:49 PM Our favourite season will soon be on us Lin, you captured it well in your verse. Tom Lin Lane September 13, 2025 at 12:34 PM Yes it is, Tom. It’s mid Autumn here and still too hot.