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Natures Birth

A bright crisp day, gray clouds could not detain;
At once toddle arm-in-arm the distance.
Whisk away with a quick light steady rain.
Fruit set, new growth, leaf and shoot existence.
Marigold starts to bloom, love's insistence.
Butterflies swarm; all different colours,
Across the garden with all the others.
Spring-summer rain, flickering gray shadow,
Blow the birds about with their small brothers.
Rainbow hues spread and hope for tomorrow.


10/26/2022

Dizain Poetry Contest Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Sotto Poet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Delaney Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 5:47 PM
Congratulations on your top placement, Eve: Love the optimism your last line conjures. SuZ
Peck Avatar
November 7, 2022 at 2:11 PM
Soft and gentle poem, like the rain. I especially love "marigold starts to bloom, love's insistence"
Miller Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 7:20 AM
Congratulations, Eve, for your high placement with this wonderful poem
Alex Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 4:22 AM
" crisp day", "Whisk away" - Beautiful, indeed! Congratulations!
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 7:07 AM
Thank you:) Many Blessings to you my friend
Daniel Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 2:19 AM
Congratulations, Eve, on a fine poem:)
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 7:07 AM
Thank you:) Many Blessings to you my friend
Kendrick Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 2:28 PM
Back with congratulations on this winner in Sotto's contest. Way to go. I love the double rainbow picture. Sara
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 7:08 AM
Thank you:) for coming back. Many Blessings to you my friend
Poet Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 8:19 AM
Congratulations from the bottom of my heart for winning the contest, EVE. You have composed such an excellent poem.
Roper Avatar
November 5, 2022 at 8:26 AM
Thank you so much for my placement. My heart warms from your kind words . Many blessings
DiMino Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 1:51 AM
Charming descriptions; the magic-wand of nature. Delightful!
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 7:08 AM
Thank you:) Many Blessings to you my friend
Leiser Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 7:36 PM
I can just picture the crisp day, as you so aptly describe, Eve! You paint the mood and imagery so very well! Enjoyed this very much! :)
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 7:08 AM
Thank you:)
Anaya Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 2:31 PM
Such a beauty Eve Roper. I'm learning from your beautiful imagery dizain, [the subject matter]. GL and blessings to you!
Roper Avatar
November 6, 2022 at 7:08 AM
Thank you:) I've learned from many others here as well. Many Blessings to you my friend
Kendrick Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 12:39 PM
I enjoyed reading this contest entry that reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara
Pandit Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 11:04 AM
A beautiful word painting, Eve--scenes brought forth by an artist's paint brush. No doubt a win for you.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 10:46 AM
I can see those butterflies swarming in lovely colors! Nice, Eve!
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 10:03 AM
So pretty, Eve. Very well done!
Andresen Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 7:27 AM
- A beautiful poem, Eve ... with a beautiful photo - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Sands Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 6:45 AM
Beautiful poem. I love the 1st line too. I enjoyed this :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 27, 2022 at 1:17 AM
A wonderful dizain. Such beautiful imagery. Best for a win.
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