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A bright crisp day, gray clouds could not detain; At once toddle arm-in-arm the distance. Whisk away with a quick light steady rain. Fruit set, new growth, leaf and shoot existence. Marigold starts to bloom, love's insistence. Butterflies swarm; all different colours, Across the garden with all the others. Spring-summer rain, flickering gray shadow, Blow the birds about with their small brothers. Rainbow hues spread and hope for tomorrow. 10/26/2022 Dizain Poetry Contest Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

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Date: 11/7/2022 5:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your top placement, Eve: Love the optimism your last line conjures. SuZ
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Date: 11/7/2022 2:11:00 PM
Soft and gentle poem, like the rain. I especially love "marigold starts to bloom, love's insistence"
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Date: 11/6/2022 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations, Eve, for your high placement with this wonderful poem
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Date: 11/6/2022 4:22:00 AM
" crisp day", "Whisk away" - Beautiful, indeed! Congratulations!
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/6/2022 7:07:00 AM
Thank you:) Many Blessings to you my friend
Date: 11/6/2022 2:19:00 AM
Congratulations, Eve, on a fine poem:)
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/6/2022 7:07:00 AM
Thank you:) Many Blessings to you my friend
Date: 11/5/2022 2:28:00 PM
Back with congratulations on this winner in Sotto's contest. Way to go. I love the double rainbow picture. Sara
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/6/2022 7:08:00 AM
Thank you:) for coming back. Many Blessings to you my friend
Date: 11/5/2022 8:19:00 AM
Congratulations from the bottom of my heart for winning the contest, EVE. You have composed such an excellent poem.
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/5/2022 8:26:00 AM
Thank you so much for my placement. My heart warms from your kind words . Many blessings
Date: 10/28/2022 1:51:00 AM
Charming descriptions; the magic-wand of nature. Delightful!
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/6/2022 7:08:00 AM
Thank you:) Many Blessings to you my friend
Date: 10/27/2022 7:36:00 PM
I can just picture the crisp day, as you so aptly describe, Eve! You paint the mood and imagery so very well! Enjoyed this very much! :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/6/2022 7:08:00 AM
Thank you:)
Date: 10/27/2022 2:31:00 PM
Such a beauty Eve Roper. I'm learning from your beautiful imagery dizain, [the subject matter]. GL and blessings to you!
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/6/2022 7:08:00 AM
Thank you:) I've learned from many others here as well. Many Blessings to you my friend
Date: 10/27/2022 12:39:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this contest entry that reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara
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Date: 10/27/2022 11:04:00 AM
A beautiful word painting, Eve--scenes brought forth by an artist's paint brush. No doubt a win for you.
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Date: 10/27/2022 10:46:00 AM
I can see those butterflies swarming in lovely colors! Nice, Eve!
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Date: 10/27/2022 10:03:00 AM
So pretty, Eve. Very well done!
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Date: 10/27/2022 7:27:00 AM
- A beautiful poem, Eve ... with a beautiful photo - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 10/27/2022 6:45:00 AM
Beautiful poem. I love the 1st line too. I enjoyed this :)
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Date: 10/27/2022 1:17:00 AM
A wonderful dizain. Such beautiful imagery. Best for a win.
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