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Nature's Alluring Song

Inviting is the vibrant smile, glistening visage of spring
Exciting sensuous hearts in nature’s alluring song
Sighting on marigold arc rising blush of magenta
Lighting dawn’s flamboyance awaited all winter long.

Blazing colors adorn exuberance of flaming-red lilies
Gazing at flowering trees, lilting in tender breeze
Raising tempo of romantic dreams, yearning bliss
Praising gift of ruby roses--beauty blushing to please.

Raining upon parched vegetation new season unfolds
Gaining on glumness of drought giggling river flows
Waning reign of sluggish tones in rear view mirror
Staining sunlit horizon gold, decimating frosty woes.

Sowing crops, tilling lands, farmers under the sun toil 
Crowing about growing corn, weather mild, blue sky
Glowing in vibes of new life, hearing chicks’ feeble cries
Showing off emerald vistas where singing Blue Jays fly. 

January 26, 2020
Placed 2nd: Writing Prompt- Let’s Write a Lento- Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Dear Heart
Placed 2nd: Strand select F contest by Brian Strand

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Sara Kendrick Date: 12/7/2022 1:18:00 PM Congratulations on placing in Brian's contest with this one. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 3/27/2020 12:26:00 AM Wow, Vijay, Monorhyme on both sides, good flow, and beautiful imagery my friend. A Fav. Login to Reply

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer Date: 2/24/2020 12:41:00 PM You are a talented writer with words that ache my heart. Lovely!! Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 2/10/2020 1:57:00 PM Vijay, congratulations on your win in my Lento writing prompt challenge with this wonderful write _Constance Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/9/2020 1:00:00 PM so you are in Maryland? I never would have guessed. I never see repliels to my comments but saw yours just now when I came here to say congrats on your win Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 2/9/2020 1:14:00 PM Yes indeed. I came here from London in 1972 .. we have been here ever since.

Sam Kauffman Date: 2/7/2020 10:28:00 PM Lovely crafting of a Lento, Vijay. I could see, hear and feel your imagery. Congratulations on your placement! Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 2/7/2020 2:05:00 PM Congrats on your win Vijay, nicely done.. Login to Reply

Hello There Date: 1/30/2020 11:44:00 PM Line after line paints layer upon layer of her beauty and the joy it brings as seasons turn ~ You put a smile in our hearts for bringing us there <3 Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/31/2020 7:41:00 AM Glad you liked the poem my friend--always a pleasure to read your comments--much appreciate--many thanks, HT.

Janice Canerdy Date: 1/30/2020 12:06:00 PM Through use of vivid details, you present us a lovely spring tapestry, Vijay! Janice Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/30/2020 2:00:00 PM Much appreciate Janice--many thanks.

Besma Riabi Dziri Date: 1/30/2020 3:09:00 AM How inspiring is Nature! How captivating are her seasons! How intriguing is her mood! Dear Vijay, your masterful pen and the wealth of your words have poured a lot of vibrance, colour and unique beauty into your poem.. An outshining work of Art! A fave and a win for me! My deepest regards and blessings. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/30/2020 8:25:00 AM Your comments speak eloquently to beauty of nature, Besma--always a joy to read your feedback--much appreciate--many many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE. Regards.

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/29/2020 4:00:00 PM I love the way you describe the beauty of spring and summer, Vijay. As you indicate, there is something special to appreciate with each season. You wrote beautifully in a form that I find very challenging. Best for a win, my friend! Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/30/2020 8:22:00 AM A pleasure to read your feedback my friend--much appreciate--many many thanks.

Paul Callus Date: 1/29/2020 11:19:00 AM Yours is enchanting imagery which appeals to our senses, Vijay! A vote of confidence from me!! Regards // paul Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/30/2020 8:21:00 AM Much appreciate Paul--many thanks for your vote.

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 1/28/2020 11:10:00 PM I have never written a lento but this poem is breathtaking, perhaps I should try sometime, - such a wonderful description of nature, but your poem's are all alluring dear friend. Blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/29/2020 7:47:00 AM Much appreciate Jennifer--many thanks.

Joseph May Date: 1/27/2020 8:51:00 PM Beautiful write Vijay, GL in the Contest.. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/28/2020 7:48:00 AM Much appreciate Joseph--many thanks.

Jenish Somadas Date: 1/27/2020 12:10:00 AM Beautiful as usual.. Nature so minutely watched and painted.. Let me see whether I can at least see around and enjoy her beauty.. Great entry in the contest Vijay.. Good luck.. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/27/2020 7:26:00 AM Thank you Jenish for the kind feedback--much appreciate your visit and comments.

Brandy Nicole Date: 1/26/2020 10:40:00 PM You paint such beautiful images with your words. I am there in the moment. In the middle of Winter, you bring us Spring. My heart is smiling. :) Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/27/2020 7:25:00 AM A pleasure, as always, to read your comments--many thanks for the kind remarks, Brandy--much appreciate.

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 1/26/2020 9:28:00 PM You make nature come alive in this gorgeous vision of spring Vijay. I can smell the fresh scent of spring. A glorious entry my friend! xxoo Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/27/2020 7:23:00 AM So very kind of you Connie--so glad, you liked the poem--much appreciate--many many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/26/2020 4:09:00 PM wonderful imagery as always. I got a real kick out of the line that begins: crowing about growing (as an iowa girl whose grandpa was a farmer!!) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/27/2020 7:22:00 AM Many small farms here in Maryland as well--much appreciate your kind feedback, Andrea--many thanks.

Silent One Date: 1/26/2020 3:33:00 PM Woah... Great lines full of imagery... You've included everything... Great poem for this contest.. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/26/2020 3:36:00 PM Thanks Silent One for stopping by--much appreciate your visit and kind remarks--many thanks.

Sandra Adams Date: 1/26/2020 2:27:00 PM this is as beautiful as a spring bouquet my friend...it just flows wonderfully with so many vivid images coming to life...i am sure this will find its way to the top of the winner's list... wonderful penning Vijay :) hugs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/26/2020 3:35:00 PM Always a joy to read your cheerful comments my friend--appreciate much your vote of confidence--many thanks, Sandy.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/26/2020 12:34:00 PM My friend, Vijay, after reading this masterfully written poem , I do not have to wait for the spring to come because you have already brought it to life with your writing! Good luck! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/26/2020 1:37:00 PM That is very nice to hear my friend--much appreciate the kind remarks, Demetrios--many many thanks.

Heidi Sands Date: 1/26/2020 10:11:00 AM This is so pleasant to read today. You have brought me to another place with your words, so beautiful! Well written Vijay! :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/26/2020 11:32:00 AM Glad you liked the poem, Heidi--much appreciate your kind remarks--many many thanks.

Tom Cunningham Date: 1/26/2020 8:10:00 AM Wow Vijay, honestly this will take some beating. Superb imagery. Brilliantly written. Tom. I'll say good luck but don't think you'll need it. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 1/26/2020 11:30:00 AM Appreciate the vote of confidence Tom--glad you liked the poem--many many thanks.